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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

person Hikari
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can't wait till the next chapter.
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EEEEPPICCC! I love this story, and this update, so very much!
person kunitsu
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooh yup this chapter really made up for it. Love the denial in the first two lines of the chapter, that is always so amusing. That is some hot hot smut
person NeonOranges
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Smut at last, and more to come!
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*has fainted from blood loss due to a nosebleed*
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nope. Cut off my review yet again. Once more and then I'm just going to EMAIL the review to you.

That was beyond amazing! I...Just—it. GRAH! You are way too good at writing smut. I think I came close to dying that time. It's a good think I don't bleed like an anime character or I'd have bled out half way through this chapter. I'm so excited to see the rest...though hearing we're not through the drama worries me...Somehow I just have this feeling Renji's going to stomp in Godzilla-like and mess things up.

Awesome chapter! <3
person kai
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hott!! i liked it. so it took aizen a week to get over it but what about the rest of the yakuza and ichigo's friends. i saw hints of one sideded renji/ichigo there, so probably something there too. can't wait for the next udpate
person NettChan
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've done it once again!!! I only wish i'd read this story sooner! See u next chap.!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hells fucking yes that was SEXTASTICAL greatness sooooo hot wow I cant wait for more!!!
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm currently at work and that hot smexy scene almost me drool and thank the deities for such work distracting piece! XD

*thank God there's no one near me at the moment...*

Hmm, I do wonder now how this will turn out, considering there is still more to this, could it be that there's another Yakuza who might take an interest with Ichigo and is suicidal enough to meet head on with THE Aizen Sousuke? Harhar >:)

Anyhow, I still look forward to your next update! *discreetly wipes off blood from keyboard and stuffs more tissue...*

Kisses!!! <3 <3 <3