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for Unwritten

by Crya2Evans

person Anon
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah...I'm speechless...and left with a giddy feeling of fluffyness.
Go Hitsugaya go!!!

oh, you awesome writer you...
person satterb
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Sometimes cute and fluffy is welcome. Especially between these two! I'm also thankful that you've refrained from subjecting Toshiro to needless torture via Matsumoto or others. I think he deserves some lovin, and I can't wait to see him get it! Thanks for updating.
person Yakumo
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to spend some time with Ukitake...alone, as well. ~_^ Great job, and I'm looking forward to the last chapter. ~_^
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! I'm squeeing inside right now! That was so sweet and cute and now I feel all happy and warm! I just want to hug them...or you, so here's a *hug* just for the uber-cuteness of Ukitake and Hitsugaya.

On another note, I cannot wait for more, especially if it earns a "M" rating! Thanks for this!
person Darkephoenix
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah an update! I'm rather fond of sweet and fluffy as those are some of the best moments in life. It isn't always about the sparks. Fireworks in a relationship are wonderful but they fade. I like the analogy. Yes, I AM old. Happy to see things moving along. Keep up the good work.
person Kuromei
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee~! XD The date went off without a hitch! ..... Mostly. lmao X3 At least Toushiro managed to get on a first name basis with Jyuu-chan. ^////^ But hooray for Shunsui's intervention! Just the kick in the pants Jyuushiro needed. ^w^

"Something like smut in the next chapter?" =D OooOOhh~! I can't wait! X3 *waits anyway and hugs Draco-san*
person Yakumo
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Shunsui so much. He's a big sweetie just like Ukitake. <3 and also the "Gay Sex for Dummies- Now Fully Illustrated!" book made me laugh so hard. xD I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :3
person satterb
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's easy to tell that you had fun with Shuunsui (did I spell that correctly?) You had him nailed perfectly. Poor Toshiro. Everyones gonna be meddleing in his love affair and he's such a standoffish guy anyway. I love this story and I can't wait to see more!
person Anon
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh, this chapter gave me the tingles X3
I'm liking your adult version of Hitsugaya more and more, it's like a sweet treat in written form.

and Shunsui amuses me.....greatly
person Darkephoenix
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has been very sweet and fun so far. Looking forward to more.