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by Crya2Evans

schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is so cute! I love Hitsugaya and Ukitake together, they make such a pretty, pale couple.

I cannot wait for more of this, and the smut (which will be more acceptable because Hitsugaya has grown up)!
person Yakumo
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn! This is looking great so far. An older Shiro-chan trying to show Ukitake what he has become...simply wonderful! <3
person Ominee
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how Hitsu is stepping up and going for the goal. le gasp....continue x3
person Kuromei
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeee~! XD I am SO reading the next chapter! X3 I'd say more nut I need to leave for work. XP *hugs Draco-san and runs*
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this older Hitsugaya.
It's slightly weird to read about him without the temper tantrums thrown into the mix, they were his trademark afterall, but I think this calmer personality suits him well.

now, as for the story, what a delectable plot! an older, bolder Hitsugaya wooing Ukitake...ooooh, the potential^w^
I loved this chapter, it was a good build-up. Now I can't wait to see how that dinner goes.
person satterb
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like you, I too had a hard time imagining the sexiness of Hitsuguya until I read a fic called Sinner by TillThatTime. It absolutely rocked my world. So when I saw this fic posted by you...I jumped on it immediatly. I just know you will do a great job with this. You've set up the story wonderfully, so I look forward to seeing what you do with this couple. Thanks for all your hard work...your fan, Satterb!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like dthis. As for a grown up Shirou-chan, I have a pic of him (kissing Shuuhei) and found it on Aarinfantasy's gallery, but when I went back to look for it I can't find it again (there are something like over a thousand pics under the Bleach heading alone, so I might have missed it). If you want it I can send through an email possibly?
Anyhow, I can't wait to read more of this (I love Ukitake).