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by orchidlover

schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story ! I love all your stories ^^
and the lemon parts are so ... HOT !
Can't wait till your next story so Please keep up the good work !!!!
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please write more of these, thet are my favorite couple and i love your oneshots!!!!
schedule December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really FREAKIN' done well! Loved every minute of it!!!
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'll be damned. You keep getting better every time. Your stories are so erotic and produce a slow and sneaky burn. I liked how you focused on some of the details this time like smell. Its something I always notice afterwards and how all you can smell is them on you. Also the dark feelings that are produced when someone is pressed behind you. Speaking of that, you peaked my interest be having elements of D&S there. The only concern I had was would Nanao really be able to take Shunsui...well that quickly? I mean I LOVE the intensity that Nanao experiences, but I still have a little trouble taking that in (lol no pun intended).

Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next installment of these two from you.
person Jennyt82
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just thought i'd give this a try....Loved it! Don't know what else to say other than keep up the good work!
person Polymer
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A highly hot and sexy romp. I love your level of detail about the sexual acts. It really adds to the pleasure of reading it. I can imagine it all quite clearly. You capture Shunsui's love as well as his lust for Nanao. She truely cares and offering herself is just what he needed. Thank you for a great read on a Friday afternoon.