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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....jus' wow.
This, my dear, is absolutely fan-fuckin'-TASTIC. The idea is unique, an' it drew me in like a moth ta a flame. Honestly...how in Hueco Mundo did ya come up with somethin' so great? : D
I will admit, however, i am a little confused... Has Ulquiorra been captured? Did he go with them willingly? Is he dead? This is all a lil' unclear ta me, though i dun know if tha's what ya want at the moment.
Anyhoo, PLEASE update this as soon as ya can. I fear this may easily b'come my new addiction, if it hasn't already.
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This, my dear, is absolutely fan-fuckin'-TASTIC. The idea is unique, an' it drew me in like a moth ta a flame. Honestly...how in Hueco Mundo did ya come up with somethin' so great? : D
I will admit, however, i am a little confused... Has Ulquiorra been captured? Did he go with them willingly? Is he dead? This is all a lil' unclear ta me, though i dun know if tha's what ya want at the moment.
Anyhoo, PLEASE update this as soon as ya can. I fear this may easily b'come my new addiction, if it hasn't already.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far it's looking to be a good start. Clean sentences and paragraphs and all the other good stuff.
It usually takes a few chapters to really get people interested so don't feel too down if it takes a few for reviews to start rolling in.
It usually takes a few chapters to really get people interested so don't feel too down if it takes a few for reviews to start rolling in.