I don't know if you're still active on this account or not, but i wanted to thank you.
I got partway into this before realizing i had read this before. I'm shocked, and quite frankly ashamed of myself, that i didn't leave you a review. This is one of the best completed pieces I've read in a very long time, even the second time around, and you deserve a few kind words for your efforts, at the very least.
Your descriptions were positively visceral, so real and utterly consuming, a truly immersive experience. I found myself breathless more than once, and I'm going to have the good sense to bookmark this one now that I've found it again. It's one i know I'll read over and over, and that's uncommon for me.
I didn't expect to enjoy this pairing so much. Kensei isn't one of my more familiar characters, though i will forever be head over heels for Shuu. These two just make sense together, and while i don't think i know Kensei well enough to write him, you have given me a beautiful picture of him here. I'm so pleased that he's taking such good care of Shuu- i wouldn't have it any other way.
Thank you for the effort you've put into writing this. I can see by how long it took to write, that it was a labor of love. You care deeply and passionately for these two i think, otherwise it wouldn't come through so strongly in the writing.
There's so much out there that's poorly written, with weak plots and too much OOC; this story, is the sort that makes sifting through all the others, worth the trouble.
Thank you again.
Please keep writing and know that there's at least one person taking great joy from your hard work!
Best wishes - Hitsu
Please do continue this story!
thanks for reviewing!
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onwards!
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good job!
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