rate_review Reviews

You absolutely must update this asap! I'm dying to see how Kensei makes his move! This story is definitely one of the better KenseiShuuhei ones I've read in..ever. Please update soon!



~Reigh~

Alright, so I think this has the ability to be a really good story. God knows there aren't enough good KenseiShuuhei stories out there. Mind you, I haven't actually read the whole thing yet. Only skimmed enough to know the pairing (or think I know it), and that is because of the way it is formatted. All of the paragraphs are smooshed together in such a way that makes it very painful on the eyes. If you go back and reformat it properly, with spaces between the paragraphs, I think more people will be inclined to actually read it.

Also, you spelled "Vizard" wrong in the description. You should probably go back and change that, because when you spell Anime Lingo that is specific to a certain fandom right off the bat, the readers automatically label you a NOOB and will most likely overlook the story.

I would really like to see for myself your take on KenseiShuuhei, so please do go back and reformat it. Let me know when you've finished.

email: Grimmjawistheshiznit@gmail.com

Poor Shuuhei, and yet it was hot seeing him masturbate.

An excellent chapter. I loved the play between the Vizard and I can't wait until he finally corners his prey.

I love your Kensei. ♥ But you know that already.

Ooh..wonder who was at the door. =o I hope we find out soon!

YES! I love Kensei so much. It makes me so happy when someone writes a story with him! ^.^ This was very hot, but may I suggest putting more spaces between lines to make it easier to read? Other than that, great job!