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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was great! I liked the "realistic" flow.
The fighting and dialogue were in character, they
noted that they were attractive, worthy opponents
and accidentally falling into an herb garden, becoming
intoxicated and pouncing each other seemed totally
plausible. Having them accidentally roll out of the
herbs the morning after and both feel mutually mortified
was a brilliant detail.
Sexy. amusing and realistic. Keep writing!
The fighting and dialogue were in character, they
noted that they were attractive, worthy opponents
and accidentally falling into an herb garden, becoming
intoxicated and pouncing each other seemed totally
plausible. Having them accidentally roll out of the
herbs the morning after and both feel mutually mortified
was a brilliant detail.
Sexy. amusing and realistic. Keep writing!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I felt this story was just quite brilliant, because I feel that NOBODY would think to put these two characters together and use something they have in common (the fact that they're cats) and have them stumble into a field of catnip... simply GENIUS!
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh you GOTTA do another chapter!!! This was a GOOD pairing!
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*howls with laughter* That was great. XD
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very very good for a Het story which I usually don't read. But I love Grimmjaw and anything with him is good good good!!!!
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was insisting that this enchanting woman who smelled so good was his enem— ene— mm.... this line totally cracked me up. And I adored the line about his mind giving him a juanty wave good bye. This was a very cute, funny and smexy story.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful idea-turned-story. Both were very in-character prior to the catnip, but that's to be expected and provided a nice degree of humor to things.
All and all, great story.
All and all, great story.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was friggin fantastic *snickering*
Catnip, two cats (sort of)--yeah, the possibilities...*grins*
Catnip, two cats (sort of)--yeah, the possibilities...*grins*