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Good chapter. Never thought there would come a day where Shunsui and Grimmjow would be drinking sake together. Though it does make sense since in the manga, it seemed as though Shunsui and Stark would have made really good lazy friends.

Hope there is an update soon. I kind of miss this fic, and the GrimmRuki moments. I really hope there are more moments between Grimmjow and Rukia which focuses once again on their master/slave relationship. I love how how submissive Rukia is when it comes to her master Grimmjow. Makes the crush I have on Rukia grow even bigger. Im so happy once again this is a het fic. Grimmjow is my favorite male character (I often cosplay as him, and my girlfriend cosplays as Rukia whenever we go to anime conventions), And i can never read yaoi fics that feature him in a relationship with another male. I only ship him with Rukia, but since there arent many GrimmRuki fics on this or on fanfiction.net, I usually stick to IchiRuki-HichiRuki fics, if I can't find GrimmRuki fics.

Please update soon.

Good chapter, it seems as though Rukia and Grimmjow have both found confidantes that they can talk with about their relationship. Rukia has her captain. Grimmjow has a new drinking companin who is familiar with problems that come when one is in a relationship with a female.


I oxides you haven't updated, I hope that changes soon.

I liked this chapter. Rukia finally has found someone who has pretty much told her that it is ok for her to have feelings of love for Grimmjow. I am glad that Ukitake talked with Rukia to give her his support, and let her know that he won't think any less of her because of her relationship with Grimmjow.

I think Ukitake's line of “And you always seem to attract even stranger friends…”, describes Rukia pretty well. Take Ichigo for example, in the manga had Rukia never met him, never transferred her powers to him, if she hadn't convinced him to be a substitute shinigami while she was trying to regain her powers, had never befriended him, and become a close friend of his, the Bleach series would have never had a starting point. If it wasn't for her, Ichigo would have never tried to regained his powers, would have never achieved Bankai, wouldn't have got his hollow because he wanted to save her from execution. Plus there is also her friendship with Renji, she was a good friend to him for all their childhood and their days at the academy, she supported him in his studies until she was adopted by the Kuchiki clan. She befriended Hanataro while she was in prison. Rukia is a person who gets along with people she meets. She and Chad worked together well in the manga when they took on Shrieker when he was after the bird.

I'm hoping if Kubo brings back Grimmjow in the manga, maybe he will have Grimmjow and Rukia working together. I've stated in previous reviews that I have always thought Ichigo and Grimmjow were quite similar. If Rukia can handle Ichigo and his cocky, and impulsive personality, I think she will be able to handle Grimmjow's as well.

I'm quite happy Ukitake is open minded and I'm very happy he told her- “Why would I? Love is love, it doesn’t matter who it is for.” with Ukitake's blessing she can now pursue a relationship with Grimmjow.

I love the scene with Grimm and Shunsui, they have become fast drinking buddies. I was so happy when Shunsui had asked Grimmjow “You aren’t going to give her up are ya?” and Grimmjow responded by telling him- “Nah, she’s grown on me." I'm so very happy to hear that, I know it's not a confession of love (it would be very OOC of Grimmjow), but it's as close to a confession as one would expect of Grimmjow. Thank you for that. I'm also happy that Grimmjow has another person that can lend him their ear so they can listen to what Grimmjow has to say. He needs all the support he can get, especially with Ren plotting against him.

Awesome chapter! Hope for more GrimmRuki moments

I can't tell you how happy I was when I found this fic on this site. I usually read fanfics on fan fiction.net but with all the rumors of the purge of fanfics on that site, I thought I would give this site a shot. I was quite shocked with the many,many Bleach yaoi fanfics on this site. I'm a guy, and I dont like yaoi fics, so I was quite disappointed that there weren't that many heterosexual fics featuring my favorite pairings of IchiRuki, GrimmRuki, HichiRuki, and Aizen/Ruki. I have a major crush on Rukia in the manga, she is my favorite girl in the Bleach manga, yes she is on the petite side, but her witty comments, her intelligence, her natural beauty and her kickass nature is what makes her so special. And I love reading dark fics that feature her with a possessive and strong male.

You made my day with this fic. Grimmjow is my absolute favorite character in the manga, he is just so kickass and awesome. I love his fight scenes in the manga, and I'm very glad you incorporated that into this fic right here. Please continue writing this fic, and I hope to see more GrimmRuki moments.

You write fight scenes very well. This chapter fit very well with the previously written chapters.From the beginning to the end of the chapter, I just couldn't stop reading. I appreciate the time and effort you put into this fic. Chapter 17 and this chapter are two chapters I really enjoyed reading. Byakuya and Grimmjow both acted the way one would expect the two to act. Bykuya was trying to make sure no shame further fell on his clan, and had to make sure that Grimmjow knew that his threat would be enforced if he didn't heed his warning, and Grimmjow acted to make sure no one looked down on him, and made sure to let Byakuya know he wasn't planning to stop seeking Rukia.

you did a remarkable job on this chapter, and once again I hope you update soon.

Exciting chapter! I had been looking forward to the confrontation between Grimmjow and Byakuya. Very nicely done.

Really loved the beginning of the chapter where Grimm and Rukia wake up together. Also loved how he gave her a genuine smile and kissed her on her brow. Such an awesome night that they spent together, only for Byakuya to come and start a fight with Grimmjow. Must have been frightening for Rukia to have Grimmjow clench his fist around her throat, without realizing why until feeling Byakuya's spiritual pressure. She probably hadn't expected him to react violently since they both woke up in pleasant moods and he gave her a smile and kiss. Damn Byakuya, coming and ruining a perfect morning for Grimmjow and Rukia.

Really loved the fight scene between Grimm and Byakuya. When Byakuya stabbed Grimmjow with his Zanpakuto in the chest, it wasn't looking to good for Grimmjow. I'm very happy that Mayuri had included a failsafe in Grimmjow's collar that allowed for Grimmjow to recover his spiritual power if he was ever mortally wounded. Very smart of Mayuri to do that. I guess it did payoff for Grimmjow to allow the mad scientist to run experiments on him. I'm also quite happy that Grimmjow was able to get back Pantera, his Zanpakuto.

I really love how you wrote Grimmjow, Rukia and Byakuya. The three were very much in character. Grimmjow took on a Taicho, quite confident in his power to be able to best him, Rukia was very concerned about her lover, and did her best to try to stop her brother from attacking him, something that reminds me alot of the mangawhen she tried helping Ichigo when Byakuya and Renji came to the human world to take her back to Soul Society. Another thing I love is how she is more worried about Grimmjow getting o murex and trying to stop her brother, than she is about being naked in front of her brother. She doesn't even notice her lack of clothes until her captain puts his Haori on her.

Can't believe the entire estate was destroyed, but it does make sense since both Grimmjow and Byakuya went all out and released their immense spiritual power. I felt for Rukia when Byakuya told her that Grimmjow was gone. She had just gotten him back into her life, only for her brother to nearly kill him. Once again I'm quite happy that Mayuri put in the failsafe, and that Grimmjow was able to get back his spiritual power so he can go into the resurrection state, and heal most of his injuries.

I think Byakuya met his match. It was also nice of Grimmjow to try to make a deal with Byakuya to stop fighting, but I think Grimmjow was doing it more for Rukia and because he cares about her and probably knows that she would be quite sad if her brother was beaten to death. I'm pretty sure Grimmjow would have won had he not stopped to give Byakuya a small rest. I love how Grimmjow points out that had in not been for him protecting Rukia and helping her escape to the human world, Rukia would have probably died in Hueco Mundo. I'm surprised Bykuya didn't point out to Grimmjow that had Grimmjow not taken Rukia to Hueco Mundo in the first place, her life would have never been in danger, but I think that the exhaustion from the battle and his wounds did not allow Byakuya to think about that.

I also love how Grimmjow tells Byakuya no when Byakuya tells Grimmjow to "let Rukia be". Now that he has his little Dorei back, Grimmjow won't be letting her go.

I'm also quite happy that Ukitake and Shunsui were the two captains who came to make sure Grimmjow and Byakuya stopped fighting. I think had it been Soi Fon or Komamura, Grimmjow would have been severely punished for fighting a Captain. I love how in character Shunsui and Ukitake are. I also love Shunsui's response of "Ah the things women get us into" and love how he and Grimmjow both start laughing at that because they both know it to be true. I really love how Grimmjow is willing to take on Byakuya to make sure he is able to keep seeing Rukia. If he didn't care about Rukoa he never would have risked fighting Byakuya. I hope Grimmjow, Shunsui and Ukitake become good friends, because once things get started with Ren and his group of Shinigami, Grimmjow is going to need Captain's on his side vouching for him.

Really awesome chapter. Thank you for the update! Can't wait for the next chapter

Thank you so much for this chapter!!! I had been waiting for the reunion between Grimmjow and Rukia and you did not disappoint. This chapter was very well written, detailed, you did an amazing job of writing the interaction between Grimmjow and Rukia. Though they have been separated for many years, the two fall back easily into the Master/slave relationship they had before, once the two get over their initial shock of seeing each other again.

I'm so happy that it was Rukia whose hesitation was resolved faster, because by her going to him, and kneeling before him and addressing Grimmjow as her master, she in her own way let Grimmjow know how much she missed him and how much she missed being his little pet and how much she missed being at his mercy. Grimmjow hadn't ordered her to kneel before him and address him as her master (Poor Grimm was still in shock at seeing her), she did that on her own accord.

I also liked how she described what Rukia was feeling as she stayed kneeling before her Master and waiting for him and his orders. By describing how just gazing "at the man’s feet as she had often done in the past, and again she felt that rush of excitement. The man had been so volatile, so devious in his actions that each and every time she knelt before him she had gotten butterflies. Her imagination would always run through all the things he had done to her, and then concoct dozens of things more intense and humiliating." By using these words and descriptions, the readers get an idea of just what being before Grimmjow and waiting for him to move does to Rukia. She very much enjoys being in his presence and enjoys what he does to her no matter how humiliating or intense to others it is. Grimmjow and Rukia have the perfect Domination/Submission-Master/Slave relationship going on.

I felt for Rukia when she was afraid that Grimmjow no longer wanted her. After all this years Grimmjow had been in the company of Rangiku, a very beautiful, and voluptuous woman, someone he would get quite a bit of pleasure from, so I can see one of the reasons she was afraid he might leave. "Rukia actually flinched slightly when the Arrancar finally moved, afraid that he was going to hit her…maybe even just walk away. In that one moment all of her fears and insecurities surfaced and she was sure she was no longer good enough for him." Grimmjow was her first, he took her virginity, trained her to be his perfect pet, and brought pleasure upon pleasure upon her. The thought of no longer being good enough for him would indeed be a very terrifying thought for Rukia.

I am quite happy that Grimmjow responded with a strong and forceful kiss. His kiss though unexpected, was a very welcome and pleasurable shock to Rukia. She hadn't expected him to act that way. After all these years, his passionate, forceful kiss allowed her to realize her feelings towards her Master- "No this feeling rising in her stomach wasn’t lust, it was love."

I love the line "The former Espada broke the kiss well after he was out of breath; he simply missed the touch of the girl’s lips to much to give it up." He missed his Dorei just as much as she missed him.

Another thing I like about this chapter is how the two are a little more talkative towards each other, and the playful banter the two engage before they take up their respective roles of Master and Dorei.

"The Arrancar’s grin returned to him, the girl’s voraciousness toward him hadn’t faltered in all of their time apart and that was something he was grateful for." Grimmjow trained his pet very well, to the point where his lessons would be ingrained in her mind, body and soul and would never fade no matter how long the two had been separated. Its like what Grimmjow had told her in the third chapter after he had put his mark on her cheek and the piercings on her body “Only I can grant you your release…”. I doubt anyone can bring out the real Rukia and make her feel what Grimmjow feels, Grimmjow is the only one who can do so.

I really love Rukia's line of “I am a slut because my master wishes me to be.” She stated plainly as if it had been as such all that time." She had stated that line as a fact not an opinion, something she herself feels will never change as long as her master still wants her and bids her to come to him to bring him pleasure and obey his commands. She stated that line as if being her a slut because her master commands it, is her one and only purpose in the her life, and has no other reason for being, but to be her master's slut.

Another thing I loved about this chapter was "Grimmjow smiled, it was warm and loving, he had his little Dorei back and he was only just realizing how much he had missed her. This was, even as small a gesture as it was, the last visible expression of love the girl would see and they both knew it…and they were both okay with that." Grimmjow is not one for lovey dovey sentiments, and that is something that Rukia understands quite well. With Rukia, Grimmjow doesn't have to worry about having to say the words about how much he cares for her. The attention he gives to her body and the release he brings forth from her body is proof enough of that Grimmjow feels she is worthy of his attention. He wouldn't bother with her if he didn't feel something for her nor would he bother with her if she wasn't able to bring pleasure to his body. His smile, which was "warm and loving", was a reward to her for not forgetting who her master was after all these years.

I loved how creative Grimmjow is and how he was able to immobolize her arms by making bindings out of her kimono. I also love how he tells her "Good girl" once he see how wet she becomes by his rough handling and telling her to "Stay". Just like Grimm is the perfect Dom, Rukia is the perfect sub, which is evident when he tells her to beg him and she asks her master to allow her to cum.

Another of my favorite lines- “Lost some of your flexibility hmm?” he asked playfully.
Rukia did her best to catch her breath and gave the man a small smile, “Master wasn’t here to use me properly…I am out of practice.” She replied seductively, still clearly interested in more." Really awesome writing.

"With his cock lodged as deep as he could get inside her he roughly pushed forward with each spasm of his cock as it filled her depth with his seed." A line that almost made me get a nosebleed. The idea of Rukia getting pregnant by Grimmjow popped into my head, but if that were ever to happen, not only would Byakuya try to kill Grimmjow, but I think Renji and Ichigo would be out for Grimm's blood as well. Grimm doesn't need anymore enemies at the moment, he has enough with Ren and his group of Shinigami's.

I really like how Rukia thanks Grimmjow, it had been quite awhile since the last time he touched her, and I doubt she had let another man touch her during her Master's absence. I also like how "Grimmjow wrapped his arms around the girl protectively, which instantly had Rukia Blushing. He had done this very thing in his sleep many a time to her, his animal instincts always wishing to establish ownership over her even when she was already his to have." He is a very good master to Rukia, and I love how you describe Grimm's animalistic side.

This was a very hot, and steamy chapter. Thank you once again for writing this, and thank you for making this chapter about Grimmjow and Rukia. You really made my day with this chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Kataki has up his sleeve, and the consequences of Kataki's actions by leading Grimmjow to the Kuchiki mansion. I want to say that he led him there because he expected somthing like what happened to happen, and was waiting until Grimmjow and Rukia were exhausted and asleep after their reunion to tell Byakuya that Grimm is with Rukia, so that Byakuya would rain hell on Grimmjow.

Interesting turn of events for Grimmjow and Rukia. When the two come together, they both can be their true selves with the other. Chapter was excellent, well rounded and sort of brings a nostalgic feeling, reminding me of their past interactions. The lemon in the chapter was captivating, erotic and animalistic (which is a perfect description of how Grimmjow is), job well done.

You are an very talented and brilliant author, I look forward to reading future chapters.

meh, standard Karma Houdini fic

Enjoyable fic. One of the few heterosexual fics on this site that features Grimmjow, for which I am glad, (not that there is anything wrong with yaoi, I just prefer reading m/f fics).

Grimmjow is very much in character since the beginning of this fic. He beats Ichigo till he is bloody, and takes it upon himself to rape Rukia in front of Ichigo because he knows that it will kill Ichigo more seeing someone he cares about deeply being defiled by his enemy and not being able to do a thing about it. Grimmjow is sadistic that way.

I don't really see this as a Houdini Karma fic, as was mentioned in one of the reviews for this fic. He doesn't go with out punishment for his actions towards Rukia. He is in jail for, I believe, about a hundred years with no contact with the outside other than Toshiro and Matsumoto, plus he was hurt quite badly by Ichigo, when Rukia, Inoue and Grimmjow went through the gate back to the human world. Plus he is a test subject for the 12th divisions captain, that in itself is a punishment, I doubt anybody wants to have to deal with that crazy scientist.

Though he is sadistic, he is not evil in the way the other Espada or Aizen and Gin are: he saved Rukia from Nnoitra when Nnoitra was sexually abusing Rukia (yes in his first encounter with Rukia he did rape her, but she was his enemy, and he had to figure out a way to get under Ichigo's skin, plus the rest of his encounters with Rukia, she willingly went along with and got much pleasure from), he did save Rukia and Inoue from Aizen and took them back to the human world. Grimmjow gave Soul Society important information to help defeat Aizen and his Espada, and he did kill Gin before he made his Escape with Rukia and Inoue.

Grimmjow takes the punishment Soul Society has handed to him and deals with it like a man. Yes he raped the Shinigami that came to drink with Matsumoto, but that Shinigami deserved it. She and her friend came there to drug and make Grimmjow pass out, while they would give Matsumoto a drug so that they can get information out of her to see what info she could give about Grimmjow's weaknesses. The two female shinigami, Bikou and Ishi were the stupid ones who underestimated Grimmjow and overestimated their own powers, and Grimmjow put them down like the female dogs they are. The Bikou had it coming, though I do wish Grimmjow would have just beaten her rather than let her see how good he is.

Though he has seemed to calm down a little, he doesn't treat Rangiku the way he has treated Rukia or the other shinigami woman he raped, he is still the same awesome badass Arrancar that he is, for which I am very greatful to the author.


This is quite an interesting fic, and I do hope the author continues this fic. I haven't been on this site in a long time due to seeing mostly yaoi fics, and have never left a review before, but I am glad I came across this and will be checking more often to see if this fic becomes updated.