rate_review Reviews

Wow! Really hot smut! I like this pairing.

i love it!! you dont get many kenpachi stories and i'd like to see more of your work!!

Fantastic, sexy, and fun, and a delight to read. Thank you.

Loved the story. And I think you managed to keep Kenpachi and Orihime pretty well in character. Wouldn't mind reading more, especially seeing as it was so easy to read. It came naturally.

Just wanted to say that this is great! You really did a nice job :) nice detail and story plot. I hope to see more stories like this :)

I thought Play Date was cute, but not overly so. Loved how you described Inoue's feelings for Ichigo, how she felt in the real world (more alive with the dead thing). The interaction between Yachiru and Inoue was fun and touching at the same time. The presents Inoue gave 'the guys' actually made me giggle out loud, which doesn't happen a lot.

I totally enjoyed the smut at the end, which wasn't at all cheesy or filled with the usual cliche's. It takes a certain level of talent to create a sex scene that doesn't feel like it's been done a thousand times, and you did just that. It was interesting and very well written.

There were a few little mistakes, like a T missing from a 'the', and some noun/verb confusion (which frankly confuses me a lot of the time in my own writing), but not enough to distract from the overall enjoyment I got from reading your work. All in all I really loved your story and hope you get another one up soon. Good luck! And get back to writing! :)

I really enjoyed this story! I don't think I've ever read this pairing before. It was just a little OOC, but I think you pulled it off very well. I grow tired of Orihime being so pathetic at times, because I think she's a great character, and I feel you opened up a very realistic side of her. I hope you continue and make this a series. I'd love to see how Ichigo's eyes pop outta his head when he sees them as a couple at his wedding lol... I really liked how Yachiru had an adult form at the end, it was very Nel-ish.
((Not to be picky but there were just a few grammatical errors you might want to check out, if you feel like editing. Nothing major, I think there were like 2 things lol.))
If you'd like a consult with further writings on this, I'd be more than willing to help! In the forum I'm known as Evility, if you're interested. Great job and good luck!

interesting...I've always liked this pairing. Good work so far but I'd be interested if you plan to continue :)

Oh, you GOTTA continue this! It's the 1st Ken/Hime I ever read, & I loved it!!!!!!!!!

WWHHHOOOOOAAAAHHHH Mah god! I LOVED THIS! Okay... so i don't usually read Het (I'm a yaoi fangirl what can I say) but I love Kenpachi and this couple intrigued me (even though I almost always HATE Orihime). I can't wait to read more with them! Holy hot damn... Keep it going or I'll have to hunt you down! hehe =^.^=