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I had read this fic a couple of months back (before becoming a member) and I have to say that I loved it! It wouldn't be all that shocking to see Aizen come up with something like this for captive shinigami and his Espada. Its emotional yet makes us look deeper at the characters!

Wow that was an amazing fic!! I loved the plot and I think grimmjow was my favourite character of the whole story! Great job!

Okay, I have now read the entirety of this tale, and I must say it is quite engrossing and enjoyable(minus Rangiku's brutal rape, that is). I especially liked the evolutions of Starrk, Lilynette, Ggio, and Grimmjow, and the how you chose to characterize the main set of kids, very nice(I'm thinking Taka and Kinomi are going to get along famously with Kenpachi, Yachiru, and Ikkaku!). It might have been nice to know just how many female Shinigami(and male as well) and who, aside of Hinamori-chan, was "collected" for additional "breeding stock", but I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. I would, however, have loved a death scene for Aizen and Gin(I'm currently on the proverbial fence in regards to the fate I want for Tosen) as I am eagerly awaiting their much deserved destructions, and have been since the truth came out about them near the end of the Soul Society Arc(I've been following primarily the superb English dub on Adult Swim, and to a lesser degree some of the newer eps via fansubbing on Youtube). Ah, well, I digress. Now on to part 2(27 chapters...this could take a while...). Laters!

Nominally I was going to wait until I finished before reviewing, but this didn't feel like it could wait. The following sentence feels like there's a chunk missing -

Not wanting to force a new born to experience the g-force of either Sonido or Shunpo, something Hanataro was finally becoming proficient in since his sparing partner was quite able and willing to use Sonido against him.

That being said, well done so far, and I will now move on to the remaining four chapters. Oh, and according to the Bleach Wiki, Baraggan's last name is Luisenbarn. Just saying. Laters.

Loved the story!

Ahhh Its over. Sorry for the lateness of the last chapter. I'm off to read the next part. And many thanks again for the Gift of Gin, lol as u put it. This was a great story I look forward to more from you.

Im so very pleased i snapped out of a bad flu and came onto aff.net to find the story finished from where i had last left off. I have to say i applaud you for how the story ended it was happy without being cliche. If i take it correctly aizen,gin,tousen,halibel, and barragan were all killed in the rescue attempt? I'm not sure but i have to say i am pleased that stark, grimjow, and ggio survived it would have been a shame if the three most honorable men there didnt make it out due to some sort of misunderstanding. I can't wait to read your newest story and as always keep up the good work.

It's a shame that Ichigo won't be there to see his child born. I was really expecting him to start plowing through the barrier regardless of it being there. Still it makes you wonder whether he even remembers they exist anymore. Still I find that terrible. And the fact that Rangiku's now probably raggedy body is still taking excruciating pain even as spoken and won't be let up once she gives birth. Plus after 9 months I don't think they continued to plan on a way to rescue the slaves too. Terrible shame it was. Still good story going here, really pulling at the hearts strings.

Aw....thats adorable. TAG!

Yay! I can't wait for the next :D Oh 'Tera was protecting her! Soooo cute!