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I guess the conspiracy continues on. ;0) "Servered" should have been "served", and I think you meant "the hyper duo" not "the hyper due". And I forgot from last chapter, "waist" not "waste". These little misspelling buggers won't leave you alone.

I don't know, but I felt kind of disappointed in the chapter. Though you said in your reply that there won't be any love between Rukia and Grimmjow, I get the feeling they will be sleeping together by your answer and the tone of Rukia's thoughts. I wanted to hope her relationship with Ichigo wouldn't be compromised, and they would get back together before something like this could happen, but I guess not. It depresses me already since you mentioned the rescue party won't be arriving yet. I "pray" Aizen won't be checking for proof this time. Please.

I didn't feel any progress with Stark and Unohana. He may be spooning her in his sleep, but there was nothing else. In the previous chapter, it had the feeling the relationship was moving forward with him touching her growing belly and picking her up so she wouldn't have to walk the long distances. In this one, it was like a stalemate. Maybe the next chapter there will be a release of some pent-up emotions.

Can't say I'm looking too forward to next chapter, especially if there's anything between Rukia and Grimmjow (I sure hope not). I am curious to know if Isane will be expected to have another child as well, and if so, with who.

Ohh they're so cute! The dads I mean,lol. I don't think I spotted any typos, so kudos to you. I can't wait for the... intimacy **hehe** I have no quams about people knowing I like adult stories, I mean, thats why we're here. I love this story, it's riveting :D and very well written. Next chapter please :)

I'm amazed that I liked this so much. More chapters soon, maybe a baby for Grim?

aww Gin was so cute. I love the extra peice! One chapter left, I can't wait.

Yes! You're right a little bit of disturbing never hurt anyone :D So the children are finally here! I laughed when Grimmjow was like "You got something to say" and then shit himself when she cried! Hahaha Nawwh I love Starrk :D Can't wait for the next chapter!

I kind of feel special, since you look forward to my reviews. Thanks. ^_^

You wrote "board" again instead of "bored", and it should have been "comatose".

Seriously, poor Byakuya. Is he going to father loads of children and not know any of them? Why hasn't Aizen ordered the capture of more male shinigami to further along his project? And what about Tousen and Gin? Why haven't they contributed to this? Byakuya can't be doing it all by himself. It would seem a little ridiculous for nearly most of the children born in Hueco Mundo to be his.

I do hope the relationship between Rukia and Grimmjow stays the way it is. I want her and her child to make it back to her husband-to-be without any baggage. Please.

Again, hooray for Stark/Unohana. I had wondered if Stark would show any interest in his children, when previously he made no acknowledgement of the "child" being his. He had referred to it as "the child". Good to see he was curious and awed by being a soon-to-be father. Hopefully, during the time skip there will be more progress between these two and their growing family. Like I said before, I love this pairing. And all because of you. =)

Can't wait for the next chapter, and see what two years brings. Oh, and that rescue party better get their asses moving already.

I have to say this is an amazing story. I applaud you for being able to take a story that would normally have such depressing overtones and still making it pleasant to read. I have to admit i randomly came across your story and then sat down and read all eight chapters in just one sitting its that engaging. I am very fond of the way you paired the characters and as huge fans of stark and grimmjow i am very happy with the way you have realistically portrayed their characters. i can't wait to read future chapters and i hope you keep up the good work

I still love it. I love that when ever I wake up there is a new chapter. ^.^ IN fact I was having crazy dreams about this story the other night. Aizen throwing babies into a fire....it was weird....Anyway, just a few more chapters left right ;_; You said it would be 11 chapters long, right? I can't wait for the update. More babies! yay!

Again, another awesome chapter. I'm glad Rangiku is finally getting away from Barragan, but I'm still worried for Byakuya-sama and Toshiro. I hope they'll be ok.

Another word - "straight" not "strait".

Please, say it ain't so. I don't want Rukia to be forced to have anyone's babies but Ichigo's. Damn it Ichigo, save her at least! Or better yet, Grimmjow, free her somehow! I'm going to be biting my nails till they're nonexistent.

Poor Byakuya. I get why Aizen is sending females to him, since it is easier for a male to impregnate more women. However, if Aizen is "trying" for the others to form bonds with their partners, why not Byakuya and Halibel as well? I do get she had violent mood swings, but if they have a strong child, wouldn't he want them to be together to have more? A bond would probably make it less volatile between them. And I do wonder if all that drugging won't make him sterile. Just a thought.

Hooray for more Stark/Unohana. The "romantic" dinner set up by Lilynette and Hanataro was very cute. Too bad Stark needs to step up his game. =) I hope there will be more progress with these two soon.

Can't wait for next chapter. I am curious about the children, and I await for their overdue rescue before things get too worse for everyone.