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loves Stark, especially how you portray him :3 *eats him* You know, its nice to read a story about Stark where he's actually IN CHARACTER. I mean, I read a lot of stuff with him and he mostly rapes people with little seductive words XD This is refreshing. I'm enjoying this! That's coming from ME anon het shipper all the way. Love Unohana's pov by the way. Very unique. Everyone's in character so I thank you. Thumbs up for the dialogue :D. Cant wait for more! Dont worry about the mistakes,-_-" I know the feeling all too well. Update soon yeah?

Kay~

I really enjoy your writing. I love your ideas and the small twists you have added here and there. I can't wait to read more, keep it up!

I'm curious to see how this will turn out. And asside from a few spelling errors here and there, it's really good.

O.O I love it! No ones OOC I think. I think its expected for Haribel to be all angry. Though I would think Aizen would want Haribel to breed with Tousen or Gin seeing as how there probably (or I like to think so) a bit stronger then Byakuya. Well I like it regardless. I hope my Aizen and Gin get some too ;)
I look forward to the next chapter