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Oh, this was every bit lovely and delicious! Thank you. I write them as switches, but yeah, a Dominant Renji is really tasty.

This is a wonderful fic. Hot, steamy, with just enough enough details to give us hints about the past and let us know how the relationship used to be. Very, very well done.
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

I love this submissive, yet demanding Hisagi you've created! VERY hot stuff.

Hello! I loved it so so very very much! It was amazing and I can't even tell you just how awesome! I'm gleeing out! Any way if you want to get a hold of me about The Lets Roll stuff the best place would be on Live Journal if you have an account. My ID is Jimaine321. But if not my E-Mail is Jimaine3128@yahoo.com I really look forward to hearing from you. Also I'm sorry about the late replay. I haven't been on AFF much lately.

Jimaine

Hahaha this was awesome porn-I mean FF. Now, where'd that boyfriend of mine go... **Reminds herself firmly not to call out "Hisagi" tonight** ;)

ACtually, this was quite, quite good. It's rare to see someone write a Renji/Shuuhei fic and make the situation believable (most of the times Shuuhei is on top, and the few times he's not he comes across as a weak character). One thing? You didn't need to write 'slut' as 's*ut*--it threw me out of the story for a minute; plus you can write 'curse' instead of 'cuss' and use 'Shuuhei' instead of 'Hisagi' near the end (that could just be me--feel free to tell me I'm nuts, okay? *grins*)
I'm pretty picky when reading stories featuring Shuuhei as the bottom, but you wrote this beautifully. Completely IC, completely sexy, and I'm gonna be smiling all day now. My favorite part was Shuuhei lying on the floor teasing Renji with that moan and lifting his hips--and Renji's reaction. Also, the transitions between their two POV's was skillfully handled--I didn't once ask who was speaking or whose head I was in. Wonderful job--I'll be smiling all day now. Thanks!