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i missed this story. btw its shirofan. i had trouble with net.

It is NOT 'coma toast' it is comatose! Use a blasted dictionary if you are unsure of a word damn it!!

I just want to tell you that I adore your stories!! I have been rushing home just so I can spend all evening reading and they really put me in my happy place. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us, it is a gift and I hope you never stop.

And at long last i have finished book 2, whew! Okay, interesting villain, though it might have been nice to know a little more about him. The progression of the HMK's was mostly enjoyable(die, Nobles, die!) and it was interesting to see them grow up. I'd help with the pictures, but I suck at drawing, too... :( And the action sequences were very well written, though I must say I question the ressurections of Szayel and Nnoitora, who were both shown to be cheating bastards when they were alive the first time. But on balance Yammi, Zommari, and Aaroniero didn't survive their "liberations", so at least that's something. Okay, I'm rambling... Wonderful fic, if albeit a tad long, and now one to Book 3, and Hell! Laters!

Heya!

Just read the conclusion, can't wait for the third part!! You're taking this story where Kubo should take it if he's a smart guy, in fact, you should mail him this and maybe he'll wisen up XD

I love the interaction between Kyattsuai and Kazeshini, you really made me like Kazeshini more, and I'm wondering if there will be love for Shuuhei and Kinomi in the future :P. And yay, Grimm has a little girl and one more on the way!

Oh and I got one of my friends to read your stories too, and he loved it, so instead of discussing the latest Bleach chapter we're discussing Trial of Fire. I'll get him to review too.

Greets!

Aww. It's over. Hinamori and Sayzel had a kid. Thats kind of cute, thought I need to know how that came about lol. I'm writing a story where they go through Hell too. It's Aizen, Gin and Tousen going through the gate, more based off of Dante's Infurno. Great minds think a like I guess. ^.^ It's on ff.net right now. I'm curious on how you will do hell. Very curious.
The art is stil being worked on. I'll email them as I finish them.
I await your new stories. Please take your time, don't rush we all can wait.
Great job on the whole thing!
oh, and yay for Gin! all better now. *dances*

That is definitely a Hollywood type of ending but I have faith that you will actually have a sequel that's worthy of the the first installment. Will be checking regularly for updates. Just a question here though. Will Hinomi actually find a man whom her Otousan (both of them) approve of?

YAY! I was starting to feel strung-out :p No, thank you for sharing your story :D Love the happy wrap-out and exciting lead-up to part 3. I'm so excited to see 2.5, good luck with it my friend, I know it'll be a great read :D
Hmm, lotsa blood in my version of our latest... I'm just trying not to mix it together with my carbon-cycle assignment. "Discounting water, the human body is over 50% carbon, blood poured from the fresh wound as the muffled sound of Kira's screams spilled around the dark room." lol

My guess is that the father of Hinamori's youngest son, Dion, is Szayel.

Love the story and can't wait for the next part or the filler fic.

MOFAF1

During the last fight I was wondrin if Harribel would make an appearance. Looks like she did. One last chapter. its sad and exciting at the same time. ^.^ So Akata is not evil, hmmm, I like it I spose. And still, poor Gin ;_;