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by NovaAlexandria

person Sarada
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I really love your story, I've been following it since the early chapters of Crossbreeding, and I check everyday for new updates, you really do write fast! I'm so happy that there will be another sequel, and I read that you take requests for it, my only request would be for Grimm and Nell to have a kid, Grimm is so awesome as a daddy, and he didn't really get to enjoy fatherhood with Zan that much.

I was also wondering how you see Kinomi's and Zan's hairstyle.
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to give drawing the kids a try. Can't promise anything, or anything good, but I'd like to try sometime.
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great one. Ulquiorra!!! And all the other lovely Espada *dance*
I'm not sure what I'd like to see. More Akata and his little sis. Thats it! We didn't see much of them. So thats what I'd like to see. Aside from Gin and Aizen. Soooo Akata and little sis please. *puppy dog eyes*
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Things are REALLY getting good, and I can't wait for the rest. Personally, I'd like to see Kinomi hook up with Shuuhei-kun. I'm sure he's gotta like her in SOME way.
person JOler
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great fic so far, can't wait for more.

Hmmmm .. actually I wouldn't mind seeing Isane and Byakuya hooking up for a little while anyway ... even if it doesn't become permanent. Still debating others.

mofaf1

person Senya
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Gosh, had I known that this place allows anonymous reviews I'd be commenting on most of your chapters from "Crossbreeding the future" till present **is reluctant to sign up here** [It was until your note below caught my attention].
Both your prequel and this sequel fascinates me for some reason. Normally I'm not into fanfics with OCs for some reason, but then -back then at the prequel- when I reached the part where the first batch of kids were born, I reluctantly read the chapter and found myself liking Kinomi. I guess it's both for her personality and her association with Grimmjow..........................and boy as the story progressed till this point sometimes I'm like Ichigo "Sometimes I wonder which is my kid" [or something along the lines], between Kinomi and Col. The 'swap' in personality (or so to say) between Kinomi and Col and their fathers was laughable (in a good way) especially since Ichigo 'retaliated' by putting Zangetsu into Col's name (though to be honest I thought that Kinomi will have her "Pantera" dropped after the rescue because it initially serves as a 'cover-up' purpose from Aizen), that I feel like consoling their fathers that "Hey, at least you're both even now" [ah, but I loooove them poking fun at each other and gloating....that's Grimmjow and Ichigo for ya].
Whoops, pardon my rambling ^^;
I would like to drop in a request -if you don't mind- a one-shot fic between Col and Grimmjow? I would love to see a deeper father-and-son relationship/bond between them (you could write in Col's POV). There just aren't much father-and-son moments between them and I feel some level of pity for Col for being apart from him and seemingly getting to know him little [I donno how to describe it........while they both visibly fond and proud of each other as father and son respectively, I just can't shake the feeling some sort of void -in a way- within Col, though it's understandable that he's been raised majorly by Rukia and Ichigo. And Grimmjow seems to have Kinomi a lot on his mind though I can understand why since he raised her and all, but what about his son?]. Donno why this been kinda bugging me (for a long while now)....thus I request for a Col and Grimmjow one-shot, after the war..........please?
person Kazes
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Grimmjow **sob** I can't wait for him to wake up!
I'm so glad you are feeling better Nova, :D, even though I had no idea you weren't well... I nearly died this morning when I woke and there was no Trial of Fire! But it seems it is on account of happy occasions so I suppose I can survive a few extra hours.
person Kazes
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I read this chapter in about 3mins :D I chuckled at the end; it's comatose, not coma toast lol. It was nice to see some old faces again. I love Starrk :D "Hey Starrk, get ya Grand Ray Cero out!" :P
person Kazes
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh no I can't wait till tomorrow when Grimmy-kun gets rescued! I can't take him getting hurt, it makes me wanna cry :( This chapter was really exciting, seeing that Hurón guy again and everyone being reunited, I knew that guy would be back! :D Haha I almost got busted writing Stark/Grimmy in class today Nova! Haha oh it would have been bad too :p "F-fuck...ngh...S-stark!"
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ULQUIORRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<

Ok, had to get that out. ^_^ Great job!