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I agree I agree! Good guys winning all the time is redundent and boring. bad guys need love too! I was really glas that you let Ulquiorra win the fight, after all, its Ulquiorra. So now its rescue time, Oh can't wait!

Hmmmm ... it seems to me that Kinomi had the 'telephone' used to contact Urahara and he was told that if he didn't hear from her in 24 hours he was to tell Ichigo where the kiddies were on their 'mission'. The rest of the kids made it to the S.T.C. but did they go to see Urahara and tell him they were back and if so did he question the fact that Kinomi was missing? I'd say Ichigo and the rest of the adults in the S.S. probably know where the kids (or at least Kinomi) have been for at least half of their allotted mission time so it is highly probable that those adults most concerned for the safety of the children (Parents ~ Shinigami and Arrancar alike ~ , Taichous, and anyone else who called them friends) might be planning a rescue mission of their own with or without sanction of those above them. It also seems to me that some very lucky kiddie-poos have lots of 'splainin' to do Lucy (as said on the old I Love Lucy show). It will be interesting to see the reaction of all of the adults and to hear the explainations given by the kids. I wonder if the adults will find out about Leon being able to open a garganta, and if so how they will each take that bit of information as well as the power each of the kids really possesses that they have kept hidden for so long.

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Yay! I winz! Then yes, you do know what I want :) Gin. ^.^ I'm in no hurry. I can happily look forward to the next chapters. I don't mind torured Grimmy and I'm glad no one gave u a hard time about it. Till Tomarra then ^.^

Ooow Bankais all round :D Exciting stuff! Hmm Ulquiorra will be tough that's for sure... I didn't notice anything major as far as typos goes. A couple "to"s where it should have been "too"s but that's all I can remember.

another wonderful chapter

ok ... here are my second round of guesses

Akutsuchi - evil earth - Nnoitra Jiruga
Akukaze - evil wind - Szayel Aporro Granz
Akuho - evil fire - Yammy Rialgo
Akumizu - evil water - Aaroniero Arruruerie
Akuawai - evil light - Zommari Leroux
Akuyami - evil dark - Ulquiorra Cifer

Akusesshou - evil destroyer of life - Akata (could be Aizen if he is still alive)
Monban - Gate watcher - Gintsuki (could be Gin if he is still alive)

come on, Akusesshou is obviously the hollow that Kinomi fought on her first espedition to HM.

Oh dear me! Poor Grimmy-kitty :( ARHHH Hurry up Kinomi and Co. I keep wondering where Nel is. I hope she isn't suffering a similar fate! I've got two assignments due tomorrow and a report Friday. It's sooo boring! Seriously, nobody cares about whether we should adopt Nuclear energy, we just wanna know how Stark will seduce Grimmjow!!

Hi Nova! This whole me being behind a day with chapters is an abomination and I don't like it!
Exciting stuff, great fight scenes dude! :D I have no idea about Reina's ability unless it's something like Orihime's power of rejection...
So I'm thinking...
Akukaze: Szayel (only cos of the pink)
Akuho: Aaroniero Arruruerie (cos I think he was creepy)
Akuawai: Harribel (water, but I'm not sure if we're only spos to be dealing with Espada that died in the winter war... if so I'll saaay, Yami :D)
Akuawai: Zommari (I got no idea lol!)
Akuyami: Ulquiorra (only because, you know, darkness, bat...)
See you next chapter gurlfriend ;)

as always brilliant writing. I'm not even going to venture a quess what the name of the air thingy is but i KNOW who it is lol as far as Reina i'm quessing her powers have AOT to do with her fathers. Anyways keep up the good work and keep the chapters writing

BWA! I will get them all first.
Akutsuchi=Nnorira
Akukaze=Szayal
Akumizu= I'll still stick with Aaroniero for water, cause of Kaian's abilitys
Akuho = Yammy is fire
Akuyami= and Ulquiorra for darkness
Akuawai Zommari for light
If I happen to win (lolz) I wont ask for anything. I got Gin with sprinkles in the last one. Thats good enough for me. All my most favorites are dead so everything is fine.
Keep up the good works!