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for Trial of Fire

by NovaAlexandria

person Kashima
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry its been so long since i last left a review but i have still been following your stories with great interest. I have to say i love how things are really heating up and you are the second author i have ever said this of but i look more forward to your chapters than those of the actual manga. I'm very pleased with how the story is going and i have to say i see a lot of improvement in terms of character development and plot progression in each chapter. I hope you keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapter.
person Kazes
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooww It's on now bitches! I love that Kinomi was so strong during her lashing! Grimmjow is gunna be PISSED!
person Kazes
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear LORD! I missed a chapter without reviewing, it just feels so wrong! lol.
Love Kinomi's bankai!I can't wait to see what abilities it gives her! I was glad to hear that the deal for the boys sponsorship wasn't a trick and I have to wonder what Grimmjow would think of his son being a 'Noble'...

I've started our present project ;) I really wanna try to keep it in character as much as possible this time. Even though I think in the base plot situation we have Starrk would DEFINITELY be the first one out, I'd still like to keep it in character, well, as in character as yaoi gets :D

See you next chapter my friend :D
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Of course you realize, this means WAR!'

I hope Kinomi gets a chance to punch the lights out of one of those bastards.
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Kitty ears. So sute. I've never thought about yachiru being Kenny's sword spirit. Intristing. Howevers I think Kubo said that Unohana will have a fight. So my prediction will be that she will fight Yammy. But I don't know. And I need to say how much I love Aizen's kid. Since Aizen is gone he is my evil little replacement. :)
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Old enimies rise again???? ^.^ I am very excited to find out who. Yes I love Akata. He is by far my favorite of all the children. ooo I can't wait to read more.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. Akata is starting to seem like he's really his father's son. Scary.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, thanks for the offer. And if I think of something, I'll be sure to let you know. ^_^ Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aizen is dead? ;_; Thats sad news. cause if he is dead, then so is Gin. Also I get the feeling Akata is the little Aizen of the group, planing to betray them all?? ^.^ I kinda hope so. Can't wait for more.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looking great. Can't wait to read more.