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First off, the item that Kinomi got Ikkaku is an onigiri (rice ball). Just thought I'd let you know that. Second, just to clarify some stuff, while my best friend/sister and I share this account, (we call ourselves Q&A) I'm currently the only one who's been reading your fics. But I have mentioned them to my friend, so I'll try to get her to read them too. ^_^

I really enjoyed this chapter, regardless of the heart-ache! I LOVE Galgo's shikai! Speaking of Galgo, where was Stark and Lilynette during the trial? I felt so bad for Reina and like everyone, I was a bit surprised by her. It was nice though...sorta...you know what I mean :D

LOL Soifon got bested by an 8 year old! XD

This is a great story so far and the first was really great too!! Thanks for sharing it!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

I am very pleased at this new story i have to say all of your original characters are very believable and engaging so far i would have to say my favorite one is Leon. I can't wait to see upcoming chapters of this your story is definitely a rising star on this website please do keep up the good work.

That was a really sweet chapter. ^_^ I really liked Ichigo's note in the diary.

I love love love your story. It is very addicting to read it and I stalk this website now looking for updates. I am really happy to see Isane playing a role in a story. She is usually terribly overlooked. The one thing I was wondering about though was in chapter 12 of part one you mentioned Isane being pregnant but in this story there was no mention at all of this pregnancy or child. Did something happen to her child? Hoping not XD. I sane needs lots of cute kids <.<. Hope to see more soon.

I'm enjoying this story very much but am wondering about any children by Arrancar who may have been left in Hueco Mundo because the mothers were so newly pregnant that they were unaware of their condition at the time of the rescue. Do Toshiro or Byakuya or any other male shinigami who were taken have any children 'on the other side' that they have yet to meet? I'm glad to see Grimmjaw still in uncle/daddy mode when he comes to see the kids and I'm glad that Ichigo has more or less accepted that what happened was only to protect Rukia and the kid(s). I wonder if any of the kids will develop a 'first crush' type of relationship with any of the grownups on either side. It would be funny to see Kinomi have a friend or two over when Grimmjaw or Nel drop by for a visit and the friend(s) be smitten by the visiting grownups ... wonder how the budding interest would be viewed by the adults present as well as the parents of the kids ... they are at a preteen age where such feelings sometimes emerge for the first time ... and both of those hollow adults could be seen as very attractive by some of the budding teens (of course one would hope the adults in question would have the common sense to difuse any situation of that sort and do their best to not offend the child or the parent(s) of the child).

Love the start and can't wait for more. And glad to be of help! ^_^

Horray Isane has a second kid. O.o I kinda hope it is Gin's cause <.< I actually think they would have an adorable little rugrat. Can't wait to see more soon. O.o do shinigami kids believe in Santa? makes me wonder. I know Chirstmas in Japan i mainly for couples but they do have Santa so I will be interested to see your take on it.