rate_review Reviews

Great start! and yes I'm still reading, I will until you stop writting ^_^

This is awesome. I commend your abilities to create interesting new characters and I love Kinomi's zanpaktou. I spotted a couple typos but now I can't find 'em. Sorry about that. They were only tiny, I know one of them was "loss" when I think you meant "lose"... but I can't remember the other. See you again next chapter :D