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"And that's how you share a spit-fire uke between two strong semes. Lesson over!" Sorry i couldn't help it ^^ This is good, and glad Stark was the voice of, um, lusty reason here. But if makes me wonder how kitty (i saw grimm's releashed for alst night) and ken are gonan go about this. Very good ^^

Just some notes. You wrote that Stark wiped the back of his mouth, but I think you meant that he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. Second, you wrote 'quack' (the sound a duck makes) when I think you intended quake. Although, I did have to stop reading and laugh for a minute at the mental image of Ichigo quacking at his partners in post-coital bliss. And third, so sexy! I loved how Stark reached his breaking point and then just snapped like that. I wonder if either of them will receive as well. Like in the case of a threesome/ or foursome?

*hyper speed* cum, shot, milk, cream, ejaculate, load, goo, spat, dick snot, penis sneeze, white stuff, and love juice. *pant* *pant* Did I win a prize? ;)

XD nice smut as ussual I can't wait for the next installment. I esspecially enjoyed the out of control with lust Stark. Who woulda thought with all of the cock-blocking he was doin to Shiro that HE would be the one to lose it! Hypocrite! XD

Lets not forget the ever popular spooge, spunk, and baby batter. LOL! I feel retarded just for typing that.

cum, jizz, juices, liquid love (lol) cream. Love you story! ^^ WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE! =D

Aaaaaa I luv this chapter *__* Stark is so mature and cool, that's kind of like him XD I feel like Shirosaki would really rape Ichigo if they were both alone /not that I mind XD/ but good thing Stark was there, poor Ichigo^ O^ Make Stark the first to go, neee XD I adore this pairing, especially in this story >heart<

You're doing really well.

For some reason I get the impression that the killer is a perfect. One of those crazy racial purists. If they wanted to get rid of the "lower" castes then having the government do it for them would be ideal. Kill a few perfects...preferably ones that were already friendly with the other castes and therefore already "tainted" and you would kill two birds with one stone. Plus the government would do a far more thorough job than one serial killer ever could. Reminds me of those disgusting camps that the american government put american citizens of japanese origin in during WWII on the off chance that they were traitors. You know- something completely insane yet diabolically clever. Man that was a horrible thought.

xD That's so Shirosaki.
I think it's going pretty well. I mean, there are romantic feelings involved, but there's a lot of lusting going on too, and that helps smooth things out.

wow so its gonna be Shirosaki Starrk and Ichigo first... I cant wait!! ~_^