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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh good, no Stark going "troublesome" ^^ but I like how he's taking ichigo's feelings into account. And in his own way he's protective so thsi is great ^^ Though about those Perfects being killed, no one is gonna miss them 'cept other Perfects who should be dealt with in a bloody. painful, gruesome manner. Hell I wouldn't be surprised if it was a insane perfect who's doing this instead of a Nocturne! (so sorry if I misspelled anything) And yeah, I see Hiyori as an Imperfect ^^ What about Nel? Or Halibel? This is great though, can't wait to read the rest ^^
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh my what a chapter *imagines the threesome* Me likely that, kinky ^__^
Aw they are still all so sweet to Ichigo in thier own ways
Yes uke Ichigo is just *drools*
Aw they are still all so sweet to Ichigo in thier own ways
Yes uke Ichigo is just *drools*
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think its much better that you are starting with the two of them (presumably) and then adding others (Grimmy and such). I think that makes is semi-more comfortable for Ichigo to used to.
Oh, I love Starrk, he's so cute and sweet! I cannot wait for more, especially if its smut!
Oh, I love Starrk, he's so cute and sweet! I cannot wait for more, especially if its smut!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you're doing pretty well at the whole sharing thing. Stark just seems to laidback to be overly possesive so that seems realistic and shirosaki respects power so when stark (who is atleast as strong if not stronger than him) confronts him about Ichigo he can back off enough to share him, not to mention shiro is pretty adventurous sexually (atleast in this fic) and would be more open to threesomes. Grimmjow is Shiro's friend so that could either make it or break. I'm not sure how you will get the other's to except Kenpachi since as far as I've read Ken isn't on friendly terms with any of the others.
Can't wait for the smut! ^.^
Can't wait for the smut! ^.^
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that you are getting it right. I love your dark seme's.
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWE-SOME :D Haha Shirosaki cracks me up. lol Stick of butter. Tehehe. I think, so far so good with keeping it all in character and the "sharing" despite emotions. I think you're doing brilliantly, but I'm thinking it'll be tough to get the three of them in bed without someone feeling jealousy... I mean who gets first crack? I just love how both of them talk about it like Ichigo will be totally fine with the whole idea. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you do so well portraying these characters!! You have nothing to worry about!
I'm so excited to see how you make them learn to share, as well as the plot itself!
And the smut. So looking forward to that!!
I'm so excited to see how you make them learn to share, as well as the plot itself!
And the smut. So looking forward to that!!
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Shirosaki would expect a very steep payment... haha, poor Ichigo. He's clueless to all the puffed feathers around him. A bunch of peacocks they are, showing off and fighting for him. I like how Starrk is a little awkward.
Cannot wait for more! Thanks!
Cannot wait for more! Thanks!
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Hoo!! Keep it up!! Thank you for all your hard work!! (hehheh....I said "Hard")
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October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwe I love it cant wait for more!! hmmm im kinda curious who your favorite Bleach character is? o.O I know its a little off topic but I kinda wanna know you write about mostly all of them... mine is a three way tie between Grimmjow, Ikkaku and Sousuke xD