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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great and I love how you are mamanging to still keep everyone as we know them and love them, how Ichigo isn't falling in 'love at first sight' (that is getting seriously old much too fast, as well as some other cliche movie plots I won't mention here), and to be honest i thought it would be Shirosaki since he seems to want to play 'shadow'. Again another great fic and I was cheering when Stark beat Nnorita-whatever up. I normally don't despise male anime characters, but his attitude reminds me of my family. Sadly, I am surrounded by sexist/racist close-minded men. Well now it's down to one but still. Anyway anyway, this is great. Talka bout relationships hitting a bad start, for everyone! Though I'm wondering, are you gonna introduce some girls that aren't Perfect? Not that I'm complaining, jsut wodnering who else you would put as non-Perfect but infinity times better. Love ya and your awesome muses!!
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *jumps for joy* a new chapter!!! I much approve of a posessive Shirosaki, and a heroic Stark *swoons*.
I've never been partial to kenpachi X ichigo but I think that the way this story is written with all my other favorite pairings I could come to like him, or atleast tolerate him.
Keep up the great work! ^.^
I've never been partial to kenpachi X ichigo but I think that the way this story is written with all my other favorite pairings I could come to like him, or atleast tolerate him.
Keep up the great work! ^.^
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this fic so far the pairings are interesting but I noted that all the pairings have Ichigo with an Imperfect or a Nocuous if your story is about breaking away from sterotypes and labels shouldn't a Perfect fall for ichigo as well?
And I think that Ichigo is handling being around Nocuous all the time a little too well, he might have seen or been around a few Nocuous's since that incident but not too many considering he still lives with his family in what I'm assuming is a perfect neighborhood and until recently was attending a Perfect school and now he's around them almost every day and they keep invading his space, pushing their energy at him and the feel of that dark energy should be haunting, even though his mind tells him that these nacuous aren't the ones who hurt him and killed his mother that incident still had a resounding affect on him, it changed him and shattered the life he'd once known forever not just by killing his mother but by changing how the world and people saw him.
That had to be hell for a nine year old kid and thats not something one gets over quickly and not without some set backs. so in my opinion thats what I believe Ichigo should have, a set back maybe a nightmare triggered by his most recent attack, the feeling of helplessness and needing to be rescued, the gulit over still not being strong enough, should dredge up dark memories and even darker emotions causing him retreat further into himself, making him cold and distant. He then goes back to school and tells them all to stay the hell away from him.
This will make the characters job of winning him over even more difficult because before they can even get Ichigo to fall for them they first have to get passed his inital resolve that says he shouldn't like them. Because to do so for him would be like betraying his moms memory or something, untrue yes, but still something for them all to work through and get passed. well that was just my long winded opinion lol and if you have a mailing list could you add me please. Meshala102@hotmail.com
And I think that Ichigo is handling being around Nocuous all the time a little too well, he might have seen or been around a few Nocuous's since that incident but not too many considering he still lives with his family in what I'm assuming is a perfect neighborhood and until recently was attending a Perfect school and now he's around them almost every day and they keep invading his space, pushing their energy at him and the feel of that dark energy should be haunting, even though his mind tells him that these nacuous aren't the ones who hurt him and killed his mother that incident still had a resounding affect on him, it changed him and shattered the life he'd once known forever not just by killing his mother but by changing how the world and people saw him.
That had to be hell for a nine year old kid and thats not something one gets over quickly and not without some set backs. so in my opinion thats what I believe Ichigo should have, a set back maybe a nightmare triggered by his most recent attack, the feeling of helplessness and needing to be rescued, the gulit over still not being strong enough, should dredge up dark memories and even darker emotions causing him retreat further into himself, making him cold and distant. He then goes back to school and tells them all to stay the hell away from him.
This will make the characters job of winning him over even more difficult because before they can even get Ichigo to fall for them they first have to get passed his inital resolve that says he shouldn't like them. Because to do so for him would be like betraying his moms memory or something, untrue yes, but still something for them all to work through and get passed. well that was just my long winded opinion lol and if you have a mailing list could you add me please. Meshala102@hotmail.com
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Stark the Knight in Shining Black Armor! I love how this is progressing, I think Ichigo is starting to get used to some of them and reacting to the surprises of the others. I cannot wait for more!
Thanks! He was wrong, Ichigo would make a good bitchy whore. <3
Thanks! He was wrong, Ichigo would make a good bitchy whore. <3
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually thought it would be Shiro who would save him but then again I am biased since thats my fav pairing. Love the way you are working on thier relationship. Great update
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this whole society thing you have going on.
It's so complex and wow, it's amazing to think you thought of it.
I'd like to be added to the email list.
My email is: shasbad1234567890@yahoo.com
I look forward to it. :)
It's so complex and wow, it's amazing to think you thought of it.
I'd like to be added to the email list.
My email is: shasbad1234567890@yahoo.com
I look forward to it. :)
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the wonders of gym in any world... Ichigo is so bristley! What a little bitch <3.
I loved the part with stabbing Aizen with a fork. I've had that feeling for teachers before. Haha, loved this chapter! Cannot wait for more (and the sexing to begin!)!
I loved the part with stabbing Aizen with a fork. I've had that feeling for teachers before. Haha, loved this chapter! Cannot wait for more (and the sexing to begin!)!
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay so cute cant wait for more! I love Grimmjow and Stark and Kenpachi Im not a super fan of Shirosaki but I cant wait to read what happens next....
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh I am already in love with this story
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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the story, can't wait for more!