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hmmm ... so there are two females with Yumichika when Hisagi comes back to the squadron from the 4th? (one blond and one with long wavy brown hair)? Love the Kurotsuchi torture still ... lol.

mofaf1

Sorry about not reviewing the prior chapters. I'm usually swamped with my physics homework/testing and various other studying. I love how the story is going and can't wait to see more of it. It sounds like Hisagi is in various states of shock. Hopefully he figures out that Kazeshini was talking about Kinomi when he said HER. It will be interesting to see how things go now that many of the noble houses have lost their heads (pun intended). At least Yamomoto and the other Taichous don't have to worry about being undermined by them again; they all seemed a bit shocked/surprised by the execution announcement as well as the other threats made toward Kinomi.

Keep up the excellent work, but do double (please) check any homonyms for proper use and spelling hon.

mofaf1

Sweet, got rid of those fools once and for all! :p Tehehe Hisagi, soo sexy, soo stupid. Poor Kazeshini is in love with Kyattsuai and the fool doesn't even know about it :( Poor Kazeshini.
Oh no worries mate :D I really loved that last chapter and ya know me I can't help but voice my opinions :D Can't wait for the smex! Woot! Kinomi gets her freak on! ;)

I love the story. The character's are very interesting. I can't wait till the next chapter.

Oh crap, that was awesome :D Haha I'm in one of the computer labs at uni and I swear I spent 90% of the time trying not to cry! lol. I got shivers when Kinomi 'rose to her thrown' :) I only spotted one error "Soi Fon was leaning against a wall appearing rather board." "Board" is spos to be "bored" But that was it, so kudos! Argh, my first exam is tomorrow! :s

Hey! Great chapter! Can't wait for more. Now THAT was a surprise and I loved it.

Nope you're right I would have never guessed Kyouka Suigetsu :) It was funny when I read it I was thinking, Kyouka Suigetsu, Kyouka Suigetsu, I know that name... OH! **light bulb moment** lol. I love that they still have the horses :D
Oh, HELL NO! I can't believe Central 46 is gunna pull this shit **Shakes fist**
Can't wait for chapter 8 ;)

Good chapter, never would have guessed it was the sword. The nobles are being idiots as usual it seems. You were wrong on heals/heels. The double E word is the part of the body. And the bane of my existence: Cloths/CLOTHES. Cloths are fabric, CLOTHES are what is made from them and what people wear. I hate that mistake more than anything because everyone seems to make it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm 90% sure that joke was Pinky and the Brain reference. XD And even if it wasn't, that was hysterical. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. Today has been rather stressful with the shootings at Ft. Hood. That's right next door to where I live.

"It was time to put on their battle faces. The fools would pay for hurting her friends." Ooooowww It's on bitches! lol. YAY Ukitake is safe, phew. Oww damn ~Kinomo and Hisagi, chained above larva, k-i-s-s-i-n-g lol.