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It's time for Aizen now? ^.^ *hopes*

Haha love that bit too. I keep wondering why they end up torturing Ukitake if she has agreed to power the device?... Have to wait and see I spos :D So what's going on with 2.5? Is that going to be a flashback at the end of 3? No pressure, seriously I'm just curious.

I love your stories, very engaging and the characters are well-constructed. Your confusion of homonyms and spelling however, is distracting. Oftentimes you use the wrong form of the proper word. Committed when you were meaning to use Committee. Quite when you meant Quiet. Cutesey/courtesy and such. Still, this is such a refreshing change from the normal on AFF. I look forward to further chapters.

Loved the chapter. And for the record, Kubo-sensei DID design all of the Zanpakutou spirits in the current anime arc, just so you know. Also, there's a spelling error I noticed. The King of Hell's name is 'Enma', not 'Emma'. Again, can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh man this was another one of those chapters that by brain tried desperately to race through in like 2mins.lol. I ended up scolding myself and going to make a cup of tea. lol! I love the idea of Kazeshini as a Gryphon, actually I'm surprised we haven't seen any in th anime.
I don't envy you with the Rengi/Yachiru moosh :p Those two would be tricky because I couldn't see Renji just taking what he wants, ya know.

well ... I suppose it is possible that Akusesshou or Emma? (guess that is the name for Satan could be the bad guy but ... as far as I know Akusesshou has no knowledge of Rinacita. I suppose Satan would and it is possible that Akusesshou was his manifestation in the Hueco Mundo world. So that would be my guess if it isn't Aizen or a misguided Urahara, it is possible that Aizen's voice has been affected by the drastic atmosphere there I suppose and therefore Ukitake might not recognize his voice.

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YAY! It's back! :D I was thinking it was Aizen but... it seem too easy... hmmm tricky, very tricky... Love the new start Nova :) I'm worried about Ukitake I love him and I'm not keen to see him tortured :( But... if it's for the good of the story, I suppose it has to be. You haven't said that this would happen so this is only a guess but I can't WAIT to see some Hisagi/Kinomi loven' ;) Mmmm Hisagi. lol. Promise I'm working on our story right now. It's seems to be fluctuating between sappy and very disturbing... I hope your has some disturbance in it because mine is ummm well, I'll get back to work so that you can read it for yourself :D
As always, love your work Nova :)

Sorry I didn't review sooner. Been away for my birthday celebration. And judging from how he talked, I'm gonna guess it's Aizen. It wouldn't surprise me to see that he ended up in Hell.

Hi again!

Great start for this story, Kazeshini can be so demanding XD, all he wants is to be with his girl :P. About who the mystery villain is, with his warm, trusting, brown eyes ... that just screams Aizen, but that's kinda way too obvious, and you'll have to write a lot of one-shots too if it's him XD, I'm gonna think about it for another day :P

Somehow, I still think it could be Aizen. He could be disguising his voice somehow. Could be Akeshessho, but somehow I doubt it. Then again, neither Rina nor Ukitake saw him.