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(8) While I'm glad they seem to be moving in the right direction and are even telling people, I can't help but wonder at Kira's reaction. I know Renji seems to think it's normal but Kira's always struck me as being a rather calm guy so for him to react so dramatically, I wonder what it is that we don't know yet. Aside from that though the rest of the chapter with the two of them was so hot *fansself* honestly they have no problems when it comes to the bedroom they're definitely compatible in that area. Hopefully things are getting better and the rest of their relationship will also start to do well also :)

Happy New Years! ^_^

Kira's reaction was certainly interesting. Wonder what's really rolling around in that noggin' of his concerning the situation. Enjoyed the lemon as well. Very nicely done.

(6) Sometimes with these two it feels like baby steps but when they do finally manage to work things out they can be extremely hot together :) It's nice to see that they've actually talked to each other instead of just making assumptions and not speaking up, hopefully they're moving in the right direction now. Whether these two are fighting or making love it seems the intensity is always there between them ;)

As always, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. You've done a lovely job in portraying the actions and reactions of both men.

Well, at least Bya is heading in somewhat the right direction.

Oh dear. Well, it was bound to happen sooner or later. Hopefully things get resolved soon.

I like this very much. ^.^

(3) Renji does seem to make things more difficult for himself, by freaking out and being a jerk to Kira it just makes the situation seem that much worse. And now after reading that conversation between Shuuhei and Kira I'm extremely curious about what other problems could arise from them being together. The difference in rank and social status are the obvious ones but there seems to be something else that's going on, it also worries me because I get the feeling that Renji wouldn't know anything about all this. With the social problems and of course with them being so opposite to each other it definitely makes for quite a struggle and I can't wait to read more about them and their relationship, you've done a great job with it so far :)

This story just gets better and better. Excellent work.

WHY does this have no reviews? I swear people have no manners. This was very well done. I enjoy the interplay between Renji and Bya. I also liked the fact his friends are nosy and concerned. Keep up the good work.