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That pic is freakin' hot! More of this fantastic fic please!!!

eee! I'm glad Renji is finally getting something happy now!!! As much as I love angst, happy endings are always nice too. Is there going to be anymore or is this the end? Either way, I think this one's my favorite fics. You did really well in the characterization and the writing. You inspired me to do a little Renji Rukia drawing too!

http://zyephens-insanity.deviantart.com/art/I-ll-Wait-For-You-148073728

Do enjoy! I know I did!

AHH FAN SQUEAL. I could almost feel the hope, longing, and sudden rush of happiness that Renji felt when Rukia confessed. Always, amazing job. Happy holidays!

Love this fic! More please!

ch14

I'm too lazy to comment on every chapter. I'm a horrible person.

And since I'm interested, it's hard to come up with a decent review. I don't think anyone understands my logic about things like this.

But I AM interested. Excited for an update. Wish that this sight had favorites and alerts.

~Gummie

Yes, I was also worried that it was the last chapter. Please please keep continuing! I look forward to your updates every week. It's good to see Renji moving up the ladder lol

OHH GOODNESS I CAN BREATHE! I loved chapter 13 but the more I read it the more it felt like it could possibly be THE FINAL CHAPTER, so I quite literally held my breath and was relieved to see your note at the end, good god, gotta catch my breath here.. you almost killed me! very interesting to pull it all ahead and to the current(?), and as always, poor Renji! I feel so bad for him here. Always waiting for more! /highfive.

You always leave me shouting "NOOOOO" everytime Renji says goodbye rukia!!! I'm such an avid RenRuki fan! I love how you've managed to narrate through Renji's point of view during this part of the series. Very creative!

About Zaraki and Orihime, eeeh, it feels kind of weird. I don't remember many instances in the plot where they were in contact enough to really start a relationship - much less get married :x lol. But hey, you're an awesome writer so you could probably make anything work. Good job, I support you!

Wow! every time you come out with a new chapter you make me have a new favorite chapter LOL, 12 was excellent! I really appreciate you taking the time to go through the general Bleach story but from Renji's point of view, it's just fantastic. I'm glad we're review buddies, your reviews make my day too :D

Oh and I must note how glad I am for this fic because it is MALE/FEMALE! get kind of tired refreshing the main page to see it flooded with the [Yaoi] tag, lol. Not that I dislike Yaoi, I love men so I suppose the more the merrier but being a girl myself, it's more enjoyable to read the male/female stories, ha.

And I love Zaraki a ton too, OH THAT'S RIGHT, your wedding idea.. gosh.. hmm.. Zaraki and Inoue is a bit of an odd paring but I have ran that scenario though my head as well, other odd parings or ideas.. let's see.. Retsu Unohana and Mayuri Kurotsuchi? OH MAN that's a big fat LOL cause have you seen how much they've been bickering in the manga/filler anime lately? it's hilarious. How about.. Isane Kotetsu and.. uh, Shuhei..? no, maybe.. TETSUZAEMON! hahaha.. I'm sorry I don't have any better ideas, trying to help but I feel I'm not that smart/creative, can't wait to see what you come up with though.

Awesome work! I've been checking back periodically just to see if you've updated. Your portrayal of Renji and Rukia's relationship is spot on! Your writing makes me really pity Renji :( Poor guy.