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by NovaAlexandria

person Kazes
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh, I can't remember what I had typed before but I know I wanted to say I LOVE Hanabi's name :D Does it mean anything? Hehe Yachiru and Renji are so cute, I can't wait for the dance. MORE more! **blush** please :D
person JOler
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... sounds like Renji found the perfect excuse for Yachiru to visit him as often as possible. Love the kid and the Kurotsuchi torture too (she's so cute ... lol).

Great chapter.

mofaf1
person Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Will Kenpachi be the menacing father when Renji comes to pick her up? You are confusing BORED with board. It's all through your stories. A board is a piece of wood. Looking forward to more.
person Kazes
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! lol. Oh this was so sweet! Nawh, Renji is so cute :D You did really well with his character 10 points my friend! This was such good timing for me, I came home from my PAINFUL physics/chem exam, and YAY present from Nova :D I can't wait to see these two at the dance!
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's so good I can't wait to read more. Thank you! ^.^
person JOler
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the first chapter, especially how skittish Renji is being with Yachiru. I think Yumichika and Ikkaku knew he had a crush on her and just wanted to try to give him a push. It would be great to see Yumi find someone 'beautiful enough' ... and she would have to consider whether HE was beautiful enough for her ... talk about putting him in the hot seat. I could see Ikkaku going for the next female who could kick his ass and walk all over him ... lol (seriously surprised he didn't try to hook up with Kinomi)

mofaf1