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person Polymer
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this sexy fic. It's not a pairing I've read before. Ikkaku and Keigo's mutual attraction was natural and not at all forced. This desire made the foreplay and the sex all the more fun. Ikkaku's care in making sure it was a pleasant first time was also lovely. Yet you kept it hot and arousing too.
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I never really read any stories with this pairing before or these characters whether it be het or yaoi. I did started to think that Keigo was cute and adorable and endearing in his own way. I always liked the Yumi and Ikkaku's friendship. I like really like this story a lot. I'm glad you chose to go with a happy ending for Keigo. Also nice that it was multi-chapter and not a one shot. I like longer stories especially like here. The smex was very hot and the dirty talk. Like the way you wrote Ikkaku oh the dialogue...
person Bunnybop05
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
U are a cruel mistress. Luved it!!!!
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was good Im glad you finished it Ikkaku is so super sexy ~_^
person Selene89
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Fans myself* wow. Oooweee that is hot. I'm so looking forward to the rest of the fic.
person Yakumo
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you should write a sequel to this story with the Ikkaku/Keigo/Yumichika threeseome. :3 Just a suggestion.
person NettChan
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! Nice ending. Applause all around. I'll gladly see you in the next fic you write.
person NettChan
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa *fans self* I like where this is goin! I cannot wait till this is updated! Nice!!
person Stacy
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooo! don't stop there!! that...that...that was so mean! please don't make us wait to long for an update oh, i really can't wait!
person Yakumo
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEASE update soon! D: I want moar Ikkaku/Keigo smut.