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by Rockyshores

person Wolfie
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ending? It just kinda stopped on a cliff hanger... :( please say your gonna finish!!!
schedule May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's really good. Do you think there's any chance of you finishing this up?
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY CAN'T Wait for another chapter. Bad, BAd Loki
person sarah
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will Tyr capturing Ichigo cause Aizen to somehow come into his virtue?
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and wowzers this chapter was so damn sextastical!! poor Ichigo he has got to find a corner and hide so he can heal his cute bum after all of that.... looking forward to more xD
person Mouse
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't qo on AFF because I always get the update emailed to me. Recently I was thinking wow, it hasn't been updated for a while so I went on AFF. I was not getting updated. Is it possible I can be re-added to the update list? My email is Aminahparker1@gmail.com
person NettChan
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kinda scared me when you mentioned triple-pen., but, of course, I read and enjoyed it anyway! Nice work!!!

That damn Loki...he's a crafty lil bastard!
person Aralaiqualasse
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy guaco molly.....I just got massive nosebleed from that threesm....oh.......///////////////////// poor ichi, must be really pain. mind do i ask if in reall world triple penetration exist? if do is the position u mentioned suitable? i try to imagined it...but, how the hell they all "AIM IN" ////////////////

hehehehe, i wonder when will aizen give up his stupid pride and join the fun XP

uh, wat a dream come true...6...i mean 5 lovers at once...ichi will never be unsatisfied.


You at last doing triple penetration.....i hope my request of hmmmm, ishida+hisdad+whoever (maybe ishin) or ishin+urahara+ishida's dad= all 3 old man (hahaha) plus one ichi.....uh,.....will be okay.....er...or any doctor's series (ishida's dad + ishin+ ishida_doctor_wannabe+ ichi? ) hahaha

^^

i am happy that you will continue this even after published book....said book, you said not yaoi...so, its a normal love story?

my big final exam is around the corner......scared. 1 week to read all 4 modules that more that 200 chapter. killing me.

i wonder if there will be non-consensual in the next scene...coz just now Loki asked tyr abot ichi....is tyr interested in ichi? yare yare......


thanks...for the great update and hope to see you soon
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I tried reviewing on ff but the damn thing isn't working. Anyway, this is great and I have a feeling sending Tyr to have Ichigo to himself would have Aizen learn some Humility. At least that's what I'm thinking/hoping for ^^ A three-way. I kept wincing but well give hte boy credit for putting up with all of them :D
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters+oner day= awesome! personballyu i think that you did the threesome rather well. i was a little worried at first, having read the warning, but it was pretty awesome. good work! can't wait to see what you come up with next!