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by Rockyshores

schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was very sexy and yet sweet. I think with all the sex Ichigo has been having he doesn't need penetration every chapter. I think he should end up with them all but maybe he doesn't need to be the only uke.

I cannot wait for more! Thanks.
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the newest chapter (I'm a big fan of Starrk) and also the other oneshot you just put up (the Yumi/Ichigo one.
Personally i would like to see Ichigo with more than one seme, but not them all. You wrote another story where he was with, like 6 guys i think, that was really well done, and i would like to see something of that caliber (not to imply that this one isn't, but in terms of harems) again. But given the nature of the sins, i don't know if they could all handle sharing him with the others. anyways, can't wait to see the newest chapter! good luck in the new year.
person monki
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, u have noooooo idea how long I've agonized over this fic and checked everyday to see if it had been updated. Seriously, no idea. The thing about the single seme though is that I LOVE GrimmIchi and believe theyre totally destined for each other but that StarrkIchi smut was just delicious! I mean, there was definitely a connection there. And then theres the KenIchi and frickin SinjiIchi and OMG I just can't decide anymore!!!!!!!!!!!
-brain explosion-
Go with whatever works for you. I'm sure it'll turn out GREAT. But if ur taking votes, GrimmmIchi all the way... I think
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid. He should be lucky he's a guy or he'd sooooooooooooooooo be pregnant at this point.

Also, I didn't get the notifications for the last few updates on either of your stories, jsyk.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, how can you write such hot smut!? Ha, you'd be a great porn novel writer.

Awaiting your next update!
person monki
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is good. like really, reallyyyy good. i mean, good enough for me to stay up until 3 in the morning just to read it and then review. keep up the good work. im looking forward to the next chapter. gotta say though, my heart's just breakin for poor grimmjow
person NettChan
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I've always found StarrkxIchi so sweet! Can't wait to read that...wonder how Grimmi's gonna handle that, you just KNOW he'll find out somehow.
person Kazes
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NAWH! That was soooo cute! I love Starrk, and for some reason I melted at "Ichigo hiccupped into the kiss," after that I was a goner :p
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay I love Starrk and after seeing his Release form it just made him like 10000xs Sexier! Cant wait for the next chapter!
person bijou
schedule December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You responded to my post. Thank you for the update and I wish you a merry x-mas. XD