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by Rockyshores

person Aralaiqualasse
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Phewww....Now i can die happily with all the delicious scene ^^

hahaha...You wrote a book? What kind of novel? Gay as well? So, if your book publish you will stop writing here? No more uke-Ichi? T_T

Its a wonder tht Ichi haven't knock out with his activitis...Doesnt he exhausted?
person seximonki
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMGEEE!!! I've missed so much since I've been gone! *reads recent chapters* Holy, shiz, how is Ichi's ass still in tact?! @__@
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I especially love Shinji, Grimmjow and Starrk :D. I'm glad you gave poor Ichi a break, he needs it. You should have him say 'no' more, he kinda lacks his normal stubborn streak. Please update soon ^^
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At last, Ichigo gets a break! If he's too sore its not very fun at all....unless its a good sore! And we know it is at least sometimes.

I hope Grimmjow or Starrk find Ichigo and show him just hoe loved he is. <3

Thanks, cannot wait for more!
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww I can't believe a chapter with no smut can be this amazing. I love NnoiIchi. And yay for Ichigo getting a break! This story is incredible, can't wait for more!
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do believe that Kenny was being patient! Virtue! ^_^
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The transitions between POV's wasn't as bad as you were making it seem. It was nice for Ichigo to have a break (although im positive he enjoyed it more than i did...).
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good for Ichigo that he got to rest for a little while without someone after his cute bum xD I love this story and cant wait for more. =D
person VioletEyes
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ichi got himself a break. I also liked how Nnoitra was all warm and fuzzy in this chapter (even though he REALLY didnt wanna be)
person Dorkchic
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Correct me if I am wrong... or if I am just reading waaaay too much into some of the happenings. But as far as I can tell all of the sins except Aizen have achieved their virtues. Nnoitra felt love for Ichigo and only held him because Ichigo said no- thereby managing to hold out against his sin and abstain. Kenpachi decided to wait patiently for Ichigo because he realized that his sin was hindering him in searching for Ichigo. And Grim got enough self control to work with Starrk (whom he knows is a rival) to find Ichigo- even if he is not planning to share once the berry is found.
Actually Grim is the only one of the sins that whether or not he has achieved his virtue is kind of hazy. He could have through his actions, but he definitly had ulterior motives. Anyway, great chapter and I cannot wait to see where it goes from here!