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by Rockyshores

schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awweee when is Sousuke gonna fuck Ichigo ! Starrk is sextastical but Sousuke needs his turn! o.O Cant wait for the next chapter =D are the other sins gonna get mad cause Starrk has had Ichigo for like 2 days at least o.o that could turn out bad for everyone if there was a big fight O.O
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sexy! I love StarrkIchigo! I really liked the tender parts. That's how Ichigo deserves to be treated. Haha like a princess.

Thanks. Cannot wait for more!

Sorry about the lack of reviews, I'm on college break and all my fanfic reading is done on a smart phone and its rather hard to review on!
person seximonki
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-Screams- OMGEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
Want more.
Seriously, this is some smexy ass stuff
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how you get it all to work out in the end!
person debee10
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
There are only 2 words can describe how this latest chapter was...TOTAL HOTNESS!!!! Cant wait till the next chapter!! Hope you had a good holiday and are staying warm because of the cold weather...its freezing outside!!
person NettChan
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Favorite chapter so far. Nicely written. In a word...steamy!

But uh oh, whats going to happen next? Whats this 'bet' thats been made? Which sin achieved their virtue already? Why am I asking you this stuff, when I'm just gonna find out later?

Anyway, great stuff, keep it comin'
person Aralaiqualasse
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i feel sad for ichigo........is he falling in love with some sin as well? What will happen to Ichi in the end because of his sin............Will he able to find a good lover that didnt mind to share him? Since of his sin's characteristic and I also notice some of the sin also develope some feeling for him as well.....


hmmmmmm.,,,,,update soon ^^

schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again, loving the hot and steamy chapter. But I wish I could remember which virtue was the opposite of Sloth. I remember that Lust and Chastity were opposites, and some of the others. But it's gonna drive me nuts. And considering I used them before I should know this one.
person Tiramisu
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Balls, Most likely, are not paid attention to because they aren't the prettiest part of a guy - But I like balls!!! Woot for balls!! Thank you for writing!! I always enjoy your brand of perversion. :)
person Muny
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
who could be sick of kenpachixichigo they are meant to be together...that or stark and ichigo. Great chapter but kinda sad too. write next chapter soon!