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January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like where you went with this chapter. It wasn't just him coming over and them screwing each other. Although, that's what a PWP fic is all about. Can't wait for the next installment!
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
woah....o.o
beautiful blend of emotions and characters. Great stuff. I've never seen the emotion behind the betrayal so well expressed. Great stuff.
Hope to see more soon.
beautiful blend of emotions and characters. Great stuff. I've never seen the emotion behind the betrayal so well expressed. Great stuff.
Hope to see more soon.
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December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story and I can't wait for more! BTW poor Shuuhei is just so adorable. He loves her so much.
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Jimaine
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It makes me smile that gin doesn't have enough blood in his body to get an errection and then it makes me very sad because I don't want to believe it... *sniffles*
Other than that it's very good. Ran and Gin are a fav of mine but I like Hisagi and Ran too. Ran needs someone after Gin decided to leave.
Other than that it's very good. Ran and Gin are a fav of mine but I like Hisagi and Ran too. Ran needs someone after Gin decided to leave.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never read this pairing before but i have to say i'm officially converted. I can feel that this is going to be good just from the little insights you've given us into Ran's actions and why she feels like she needs to be in such control. I do wonder just how much longer Shuuhei is going to stay submissive and if he'll eventually turn the tables on her and if by then she'll want to relinquish control... But i'm rambling. Essentially all i wanted to say was that i loved the two chapters and hope you hurry and post another set because the work was fantastic!!
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was HAWT!! I think I'll keep an eye out for your future writings!! :)
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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I liked it :) But I felt a bit sad for Rangiku with the whole Gin thing... Nicely written my friend, sometimes these things just demand to be written regardless of planning :)
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really enjoyable. Poor Shuuhei--poor Rangiku! (Heh--like she could resist THAT for very long).
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AHH! Once again you've brought tears to my eyes from your writing's sheer awesomeness, and my heart is pounding! I started to read the description and I was like "SCORE! MALE/FEMALE FOR ONCE!" then I noticed the author and I was even more thrilled! God I need to catch my breath here, I think I kept it held through most of the reading. You are too good at this, your comedy and pinpointing the characters, and delicious sex, ohh man.. I've been through some fics here on AFF but you're currently my favorite writer, and I can't see anyone taking that place with how awesome your writing is.