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by rosuki

schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, I came back to this story. I think I last checked it when you were on Chp 8, *ducks head from being whacked*... Soooo, now that I've updated I can't help but love where you've taken this story! The link you give for the pic of their future lil family is SO sweet! I don't blame you for being inspired by it.
I also can't help but wish there was a flashback or something of the apparent huge milestone that happened between Grimmy and Ichigo that was skipped! How dare you!? Lol.
I think I read something at the end of 24 that said it wasn't the last chp. I hope you have a few more up your sleeves! Good job!
person bleachfan7
schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
will this be finished? seems to be a chap or 2 away from end. i wanna know about the baby and the nakama/fam reaction to ichi finally coming out (given his previous bad-ass rep & grim's current bad ass rep).
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved Grimmjow in this chapter! He is adorable, how he took care of her. And i agree, deep down Grimmjow does have a code of honor. Like when he repayed Orihime, and when he had her heal Ichigo so the fight would be fair. Will keep reading when i have time!
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is my review for chapter 4. I never skip dark chapters, yaoi i will skip but i like darkness. Aizen would have gotten a different reaction out of me lol. I am glad you like my name, i chose it because i am attracted to so many of the men of bleach. Especially Gin -sighs-. Well. I am sorry i stopped reading, i will get through each of your chapters and review all of them. You will get sick of me. Hehe.
person bleachfan7
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
posting reviews her sucks w/that silly word thing--its barely understandable.

well, this was a happy chap w/aizen getting his but handed to him & expressions of mutual love from grimichi. hope yoruichi is ok. assume wedding will go on. was hoping fic would cover baby too... chap would need to be long to cover wedding then timeskip to birth. wanted to see ulqui as dad and hoped tats would be a funny auntie. loved how protective grim was--he was more like a brother than ichi!

can we get one more ulquihime lemonade? extra chap or epilogue?
person Kagome
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha want to go again lmao xD Oh Ulquiorra your an animal. XD I'm so happy you directed me here to read all this, but looking at it now I realize it's not quite over at all. Which is exciting to say the least! But I do wonder how it shall come to an end. I would have thought it would have ended with Aizen's defeat; would of been suitable I suppose... But seeing how it didn't you got me wondering. XD

Also....I now this is mainly UlquiHime, but are you gonna tease us with some GrimmIchi content? >_> Certainly would be entertaining, specially knowing Rukia loves the strawberry. Wonder how she'd react if Grimmjow and Ichigo were going at it. Talk about a world of shock!!

By the way this is RSG (Rin Sessy's Girl) from fanfiction.net. Told yah I'd fly over here immediately! XD That being interrupted by that damn down time while reading is annoying as all hell. Reminds me why I never was a big fan of AdultFanFiction. Anyway keep me posted for another update!

Love,
Kagome (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~ Will give your flamers hell to pay!! XD ~ Also RSG from Fanfiction and Sin Mortis from DA and Fiction Press.)
person Kagome
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I'm an idiot. XD I thought chapter 20 was the last one! *bangs head on wall* I forgot the damn thing needs you to scroll down to see that it isn't. Don't I feel quite foolish. But at least now I'm certain I'm reviewing the last chapter so far! ( Why is Fanfiction's going to next chapters so much easier?! Even MediaMiner's is too!) Still got me wondering how this is all gonna end. There seems to be no main conflict to give reason for it to still keep going. So unless you got a little evil thing up your sleeve than by all means continue and keep me posted!

Love,
Kagome (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~ Will give your flamers hell to pay!! XD ~ Also RSG from FanFiction and Sin Mortis from DA and Fiction Press.)
person bleachfan7
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
squeals w/delight!

loved the proposal, so perfect, including the descrip of ring & inscription. wish i could draw so i could do artwork for this. & like the idea of quicker gestation so the story can move more quickly--they should marry right away if baby is gonna quick fast (or babies).

the grimichi was cute/sweet. grim is so endearing. do the sisters (or at least karin) already know the nature of their relationship? sounds like. the 3 boys together was also cute.
update soon pls!
person bleachfan7
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so cute. ulqui demanding help, ichi refusing, the romantic moment between the boys--all so cute. update soon pls.
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*¬* I almost die from a nosebleed, that was so hot!!! Poor Ichi, that was awful but I am dying to read some more, Grimmy and Ichi are a great couple =) hahaha Ichi is going to get a honry sexy cat xP *¬* Love the story, you are doing a great job and love you for updating so fast, take care and tons of love, XoXo.