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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! You've updated so much that I'll have to catch up now! LOL. I didn't have any net for the last couple of days *pouts* so I have to catch up on a lot of fave fics now.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
read last few chaps in a row. can't believe what poor ichi went thru, but happy to read grimmy was there to help put him back together. btw--warning re: assault said yaoi sex, not rape scene, though at to of chap it says non-con--some folks skip top notes (or bottom notes) so be consistent & clear that its a rape scene. as said before, not a yaoi reader, but the way its set up here is so sweet, i'm not minding it. glad to see him comfortable enough w/hime's friendship to let her heal him though it means she'll know what happened (love ichihime too, so close platonic friendship very appealing). the ending cuddle/purring was just so cute.
loving the ulquihime. want them married before she's showing in fic so for once she's spared the extra stigma/harassment. luv supportiveness depicted in rel'p w/tats.
loving the ulquihime. want them married before she's showing in fic so for once she's spared the extra stigma/harassment. luv supportiveness depicted in rel'p w/tats.
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love my ulquihime!
normally not into yaoi, but the little exchange between ichi & grimm at end of chap made me think of those 2 2gether--and i wasn't repulsed--kinda sexy actually. or maybe they are just destined to be best buds.
when will nakama learn of pregnancy? unmarried teen mom may not go over too well, but if they get married, at least part of stigma would be removed...
normally not into yaoi, but the little exchange between ichi & grimm at end of chap made me think of those 2 2gether--and i wasn't repulsed--kinda sexy actually. or maybe they are just destined to be best buds.
when will nakama learn of pregnancy? unmarried teen mom may not go over too well, but if they get married, at least part of stigma would be removed...
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love grimmy! he & tatsuki have been paired a couple of times & they complement each other well if you were looking for a side pairing for this fic that's not the same old cliche.
the ulquihime scene was lovely. it was sweet how neither is experienced & are figuring it out as they go, working off instincts. love how ulqui is so much more open around her, and how she is more take-charge than around nakama/school mates.
the ulquihime scene was lovely. it was sweet how neither is experienced & are figuring it out as they go, working off instincts. love how ulqui is so much more open around her, and how she is more take-charge than around nakama/school mates.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*¬* great chapter, it was hot xP he is a fast learner hehehehe lucky girl!!! hope to read more about Grimmy too! Hope to read you soon, take care XoXo.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha I love youuuuuuuuuuuu ..... "Oh." He scratched his head and began to blush. " Well...you know...with...what happen...I didn't....wel-AH fuck it! You and Ulquiorra are fucking?!" hahahahahahaha I'm still laughing like an idiot that part is pricelees I can even picture Grimmys face saying that *sigh* Orihime is a lucky girl, Ulquiorra is so adorable, they are perfect together =) Love you even more for updating so soon, can't wait to read more, is like a drug hehehehe take care, tons of love, XoXo
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
read several chaps in sequence till this last one w/ulqui's death. its still sad to read that scene, though here it ends w/determination to bring him back. its also sad the boys don't understand her grief--but how could they. they don't know all she's been thru, or what he's prevented from happening to her. it would be nice if they had more faith in her though--if you risk you life to rescue someone, if you find them worthy enough for that, have faith they have a legit reason for their actions.
seem to be more errors in last few chaps read, maybe b/c when on a roll to get ideas down type really fast or dictate if using speech-to-text software to catch things (like through instead of threw). if ever go back thru chaps, might take time to re-proof & edit, but not needed at moment...
look forward to next chap.
seem to be more errors in last few chaps read, maybe b/c when on a roll to get ideas down type really fast or dictate if using speech-to-text software to catch things (like through instead of threw). if ever go back thru chaps, might take time to re-proof & edit, but not needed at moment...
look forward to next chap.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loooooooooooooooooooove it!!! thank you, thank you, thank youuuuuuuuu!
You want cute pics??
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lb4mi2SOIO1qe0vlfo1_500.jpg
and I loveeeeeeeeee this one
http://img403.imageshack.us/i/familydaybyruskybozd316.jpg/
You want cute pics??
http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lb4mi2SOIO1qe0vlfo1_500.jpg
and I loveeeeeeeeee this one
http://img403.imageshack.us/i/familydaybyruskybozd316.jpg/
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yikes! will baby be from rape or from ulqui? since just days apart, guess won't know till birth (not sure if prenatal testing can determine father)... happy he's back & with her, though.
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January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!! Glad you like the pics, they look so adorable together, I would love to see them with tons of babies hahahaha I agree with you that Ulquiorra would help Orihime to be stronger, the opposite of Ichigo, he always is trying to protect her, that only makes her depend on him all the time but I felt that Ulquiorra would be more like Rukia, he would help Orihime to be stronger, he would have pushed her to be more confident in herself and her powers =) and Orihime would have been so good to him, she is so sweet and kind, all the love she could have given him *sigh* They were perfect for each other. Thanks so much for sharing and writing so fast!! Can't wait for next chapter. Tons of love!! XoXo.