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well nice that he's good to stay in LW. honestly prefer keeping focus on 2 main characters. the little bit that went into ichi & ruk i didn't care for (don't like pairing, but that's just me). i am much more interested in the ulquihime interaction in LW and how he'll adjust, plus it was mentioned in a.n. that hime would be preggers, so interested in how that plays out of course.

hahahahaa that was so funny, Ulqui is so adorable asking questions like a three year old xD mmmmmmmmmm it would be very interesting to read how much he is going to learn about "pleasure" from Orihime hahahaha thank you so much for sharing, I love the way you mix your ideas with the original story, great job!!, take care, tons of love, XoXo.

Ok, you have three options, one, you change the end and he is not killed (you will not be the first writer to keep him alive), second, you keep true to the end and kill him (please don't do it T.T) and third, you kill him but find a way to bring him back. Love the story, if someone was able to show love to Ulquiorra it was Orihime, I was devastated when he died, they were perfect for each other, she would have teach him how to love and he would have teach her to be strong, they were good for each other =( take care, thanks for sharing and hope to read you soon =)

I liked how Ulqui and Hime got together to overwrite their traumas especially when such a huge turning point is looming. I'm really wondering what you have planned (I'm getting anxious at the thought of it actually! I keep thinking 'something-something is going to happen and I'm gonna cry myself to sleep just thinking about it (I'm an emotional masochist and sometimes sad endings just leave a huge impact in me that just keeps my head running)'... (won't tell because that might be where you're going and I don't want to give you away. LOL. Seeing the drama and emotions in here, I can't help but keep wondering.) The suspense is killing me now! Gah!

Love it! It's hard work to try to make it work, to agree with the real story but at the same time add your ideas =) really hoping Ulqui is going to have a happy ending! T.T But you are the auhor and it is your story, this will go where you want it to go! Thanks for sharing and updating so soon! Tons of love! XoXo.

Wow! For Ulquiorra to be going through that came totally unexpected to me, but its a good way to show why he's so cold and detached. Sometimes sex is a show of domination, a physical way of proving yourself or mind-control. I do like the fact that both him and Orihime kind of share the same experience and this could help them develop a relationship. Their pain brings them together. =)

I have to admit that I found Orihime's and Ulquiorra's interaction cute (since he doesn't understand humans and kind of takes things too literal and questions it). Loved it!

felt so bad for poor ulqui. their moment of togetherness & comfort was so sweet. can't wait for them to finally take it to next level since neither has experienced lovemaking. should be super tender to understand intimacy is supposed to feel good to you & you feel good making your partner feel good too.

i did read about half of rape chap till he started getting more vicious, then skimmed over rest skipping over what i expected to be too much.

the last chap was very satisfying. grim may be battle hungry but he's so arrogant i think the idea of forcing himself on anyone would be insulting. i agree he wouldn't agree w/idea of rape. it was touching to see him protective & caring but still needing to save face/keep image by saying things in a callous way. wonder if he'll be portrayed as big brother type or if he'll develop romantic feelings for hime.

ulqui's inner revulsion at sight of hime's injuries while keeping his features reactionless seemed perfectly in character (if ulqui was developing feelings for her). wonder if hime will follow aizen's command not to heal her hymen. guess she has to since she doesn't know if he'll repeat assault. but if she does, she could ask ulqui (or grim) to re-deflower her to attempt to overwrite the memories.

look forward to next chap.

I'll admit that writing rape scenes is hard (I wrote one for my Grimm/Oc and I almost cried at make my female character go through that.), but I have a feeling that this event could play an important role in the story. Like a drama effect since Orihime will needs lot's of comfort and healing. I still like that you kept Ulquiorra in character, but how is he going to act around Orihime after what his 'lord' has done? Hmmm... So many questions.