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by vbruce

person Tazzy
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* *PURRS* Oh, Mistress, may I have more??????
person gaara89
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Update soon!


~Reigh~
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!! I like the balance of expertise and emotion Uryuu experienced while trussing Renji up. This was well done, Phoenix, with the low emotion well balanced with the highs. I'm not all that familiar with Bleach, but this scene could be the beginning of a whole different relationship for these two, which might range from sex to comforting each other after a battle. If you want to go forward with this I think you'll find lots of readers who dig this sort of added depth to their relationship, and I volunteer to be at the head of the line (well, right after Katami). But I also think it works just fine as a one-shot. Thanks for sharing!
person KDSarge
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well done! Your tweaks are in just the right places, and enhance the whole greatly, I think.
person psyca
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Phoenix, that was amazing. Extremely sensual and erotic, and tantalizingly suggestive. I just loved it.
person katami
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nothing says love like a bound redhead. Brilliant as always, Phoenix. I love the details and the visual of Renji all tied up is going to be with me for ages. I still expect a second chapter though, I will borrow a fish from KD if I have to.
person draelynn
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ichigo laughed himself incontinent...

Best. Line. Ever. And just picturing that particular tidbit of scene is hilarious.

I never would have guessed you for this pairing... or is it? Will be? That was the fear - two disparate compatriots actually finding such initimate ground in common. It could be epic and explosive and brain melting all at the same time.

Why is it the redheads that always like the bondage? Not complain... nonono. Hold your head high... it's intriguing. I'd sure as hell read more.