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Oh my!!! I absolutely LOVED those!!! Good God I am dying for a continuation of the first one and more from the second!!!! That is surely one different pairing but it was freaking amazing!!! I soooo wish that you can continue them someday!!

Not to offend your friend Lazes, but I prefer your story, Nova. You made me fall in love with Byahime with your last tale. Write more about them, please!

I loved your one shots you two! I would love to see Soi-fon and someone I think she would be interesting paired with someone. Maybe even an arrancar. Perhaps she would grow out of her infactuation with Yourichi or used to someone else to feel more strongly for them then Yourichi. I don't know who she would paired with though. It's be interesting to see Gin with someone and Isane as well.

this was one of the most smoldering lime scenes i've ever read--it was really really sexy! i adore byahime pairing despite how little fanfic there is for it. realize this is from a long time ago, but if you still write on this site, it would be great to continue this into a more complete fic (or just a complete lemon scene w/suggestion of a future relationship). i'll admit is skipped most of the beginning given the reference to ichiruki, which i hate. just jumped till i could see it was just ori & bya, so can't comment on early content, but i could believe their attraction to each other & belief that it was something never to be. hope to read more byahime from you in future.

Thats so sad! Poor Hime, going years and years without her sexy husband touching her. Imagine waiting that long before giving your beautiful wife her first kiss! i liked the first story much better, very sweet, and also steamy

wow! that was the steamiest depiction of foreplay/oral I've ever read, and thank you for not being vulgar. That was HOT and had emotion and was beautifully written. Too bad it stops where it does, but then, maybe we readers might explode if we got to read of the full encounter. Especially liked how bya regarded this as the beginning of something more, as opposed to a booty call... thx.

Really good stories. Two different takes were very intriguing.

I prefer the first OS. Orihime is less herself in the second.

The only critique I would give would be that there are some spelling errors. Thy should be thigh and you use threw when you should use through, they sound the same but have different meanings. Example: he ran his fingers through her hair versus he threw the ball. Other than those very minor complaints your story is one of my favorite Byakuya stories I've read. He shows so little of what is going on in his head in the anime and manga I imagine that he might be a difficult character to write, but I think you did a good job of keeping him and the other characters believable.

That was amazing! I loved both of them. I liked the pairing, and can understand why it would be difficult to write, but you both did a wonderful job of it. I would love to read more of this pairing and even other pairings as well. Great job!!