rate_review Reviews

Lovely story. I do hope you post more soon! your couple is so sweet!

This was a fun read.

Grimmjow and Ulquiorra are so cute together, both too stubborn to admit their feelings for one another but I especially liked the ending. Poor Grimmjow, anyhow great story, I loved it!

Since English isn't your first language I believe you've done very well with this. For the most part, the mistakes are small and in the details, English is a pain in the butt to learn as a native speaker much less as a second language. For example, in this sentence: Would you mind take the presentation now? Take should be taking. Still good in spellcheck but not in practice. There are a few others but again those are in the details. Overall, the bumps are few and this has been an interesting read so far. Thank you.

Hello there, I don't review very often but I felt this was worth the effort. I really enjoyed reading what you've written so far. I feel like the relationship is quirky and entertaining to read and watch develop and I can picture it quite well in my head. I love the dynamic between Grimmjow and Ulquiorra, not to mention the pairing. I am most definitely looking forward to more. Also, if you are looking for a beta, I am more than willing to offer my services.

Cheers,
TillThatTime