rate_review Reviews

"Where’s the porn!?"

That's what I wanna know!

Awesome, awesome, awesome, AWESOME!!! Can´t wait till I know how it ends up like!! Yay!

So very, very happy you're still writing this. As I have always loved Renji and Rukia's backstory and have always been disappointed at how one-sided most people see it, I love that you've made a completely plausible plot around a plausible and nuanced relationship that reveals the depth of Rukia's bond to Renji as well as the friendships that Renji and Rukia have made with Ichigo and Orihime. I do hope you let them be happy after torturing them some more as Renji needs a victory every once in awhile. Fantastic work so far, it characterizes Renji, Rukia, and Ichigo almost exactly the same as I see them and I can't wait to read more.

"Smoke them, maybe they'll kill you so I don't have too." One of the best lines I've read in any fic. I love it when writers can give Byakuya a joke or two without making him ooc. Good job!

It's very angsty and well written, I like it. I do wish I could see more of the cocky, balls-intact, red pineapple, but I know you have your reasons with your OOCness. The idea of Renji being a vizard is pretty cool. It would have been neat to see the vizards that helped Ichigo, help out as well. Hope to see an update soon!

Chapter 8 soon!

You can't leave it at that!! You need to update immediately. There aren't enough good Rukia/Renji fics out there! Congrats on such a fantastic start!

Cliffhangers suck! Gime Six now!

Oh more soon. Chapter 5, I demand it! Poor Renji!