Just finished this story the second tine around. I'm obsessed and hoping for a conclusion!
Hello,
First of all, what a great story. This is definitely the best Bleach fanfiction out there. I normally don't write reviews, because I think it's a bother, but when I read you were having a hard time and aren't receiving any reviews anymore, I thought it was the right thing to do.
I really hope you continue with this story, as it's the best I've read so far. I really love how detailed you are about all the characters and their emotions.
I am a big fan of Ichigo x Aizen and I hope they'll still end up together. (I'm a big romantic).
Just know that you're an amazing person for being able to write something this amazing. You could seriously publish this...
I hope this review has lifted your spirits a bit and you can find the motivation to keep writing.
Kind Regards,
Emma
Can't wait for next chapter. The story is sooo good, steamy, and sick and twisted. Love your work too.
Hope you feel better soon.
Love this story so far! Sorey to hear about your health, I hope everything is okay. As much as I want to read the ending, your health is definitely more important so don't push yourself! That being said, this is one of my favourite stories and can't wait to read how it ends :)
I feel really bad that I've only just found this - but Bleach is a recent obsession of mine (I know, where the hell have I been?!). Anyway, I wanted to review and say how much I have enjoyed this so far (I've just read the whole thing up to chapter 43 with crossed legs as I've needed to pee for about two hours but didn't want to stop even for a moment). It's always difficult with long stories to keep track of everything, and to make characters believable and I just wanted to support you on Uryu's actions. Yes, OOC for him in the anime/manga, but not for all the sh*t he has been through in this story. I also wanted to congratulate you on getting Urahara exactly right. I love the crazy guy and you've got his attitude and dialogue pitch perfect.
I was gutted when you said Toshiro was going to be killed (literally yelled "NO!" at the screen) as he is my absolute favourite. But other than losing him, I'm happy; you've held on to many disparate threads and weaved them all together to make a great story, and one you should be very proud of. (One minor gripe are the few grammar issues, mainly some problems with verbs occasionally and confusing it's/its, but given you've been dealing with all manner of RL stuff, that is definitely forgiveable). Looking forward to the next, whenever that may be! SP
I just started reading your story a couple of days ago and finally got to chapter 43. I absoulitly love it i want to read it from the beginning again. Hope you get to feeling better and your health improves. And hope you update as soon as you can i cant wait to see how this story ends. Best regards.
Ch. 40
Still enjoying the story, when it's updated. Thanks for doing so, despite your health issues! Feel better soon!
Ch. 40
Yeees! Things are heating up!!! Ichigo made his choice, but it will be difficult for him to act, I think. If he truly loves Aizen, and is not under illusion, will he be able to raise his blade against his lover?
And I'm sorry to hear about your health. ;_;
I think health is the most important thing. Take care of yourself, heal quickly, rest and don't feel pressured to finish the story before Bleach ends. I'd be happy if we get chapters more often, but that woud mean it will reach its end faster.
Sorry for my bad English and take care. Big hug from a loyal fan : )