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by Darkprism

schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Lord... This was amazing!
Not only you had me glued to my laptop for four hours straight, reading every single sentence at least twice. You also made me change my panties three times. This was without a doubt one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Even as an original story it would be very pleasurable to read. The characters are well developed and their relationship feels very real and natural.
Passionate, rough, fluffy and at times heart-wrenching. Very well balanced and not overdone or cheesy.
You really have a way with words, I love the way you describe thoughts, atmosphere and emotions with such a colourful vocabulary.
This story made me laugh, cry, shiver and cum in my pants. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art.
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was freakin' AWESOME!
Loved the way it was written, and especially liked the ending :P

great work and keep at it :)
person Kagome
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, simply wonderful. I was utterly surprised that you managed to keep them into character even if it was an AU story. I don't think there are more than three or four Bleach fanfictions that I've ever really liked and now I can proudly put yours between them. It was deliciously explicit, with a pinch of angst and good humor. You really made my day ... and night ^.^ I'm dearly looking forward to reading more from you!
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DUUDE!! omfg that is some of the HOTTEST SHIT I have read in for fucking EVER!!!!!! *wipes sprays of drool off her screen*

HOT. DAAAAAYMN! *still reeling from the hotness* I can't be more eloquent than that. Hot. Fuckin. DAMN.
person Maja
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel like there should be a sequel to this or that you should find someone to go with Shuu (Kensei?). Overall it was awesome and I'd love to see you do something like this again!!
person zhanghii
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Superb. This is one of the best (and wonderfully written) ByakuyaxRenji stories I have read. Amazing descriptions and great use of the English language. The ending put a smile on my face. I can only hope you will write more stories in the future.
person qwerty
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love this story!!! That was such a good ending! Bravo!!
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well damn, thank you for one of the, if not the best ByakuRen stories ever =D
person Anon
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome story, like I have to tell you. I could only imagine all the things Byakuya and Renji did for two whole weeks in that hotel. So hot. Anyway, I loved it!
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Much as I'm sad to see it end - and I actually did cry 'oh, no!' out loud when I saw 'Final' noted on this chapter's heading - that was the sweetest, most perfectly lovely ending one could have asked for. This story will remain a perennial favorite for all the right reasons; exquisite writing, detailed plot, dead-on characterization, and of course screen-meltingly hot sex sequences.

I hope this means we will soon be looking forward to your next installment in the Bleach fandom?

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