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April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Better than ever! I love the little details you work in, like the origin of the beads that Byakuya wears. And of course, the, ah, larger details.
Also, a suggestion/request, although I don't know what your limits are with your writing, but I would love, love, love to see Renji fisting Byakya at some point along the line. We already know Byakuya's a kinky bugger with a bit of a masochistic streak, so he'd probably get off on it, and Renji would probably have just as much fun doing it. As I said, only a though to take as you see fit. Delighting in the story as always.
Also, a suggestion/request, although I don't know what your limits are with your writing, but I would love, love, love to see Renji fisting Byakya at some point along the line. We already know Byakuya's a kinky bugger with a bit of a masochistic streak, so he'd probably get off on it, and Renji would probably have just as much fun doing it. As I said, only a though to take as you see fit. Delighting in the story as always.
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear Darkprism!
I have been following this story for a while now and I must show my gratitude for such quality work as the one you presented us with. It`s a rare occurrence that such intense and easily visualized writing is found and every time I do manage to come across something more than the usual I take the time to look into the author`s other posts. I must congratulate you again for your unbelievable talent and skill, and though I know nothing of you I can only imagine that you are a brilliant person and will continue to follow your work here on AFF. I wish you the most prolific career as a writer and hope you will continue to keep us entertained for we, your fans, are greatly appreciating your efforts.
Love and a huge thumbs up,
Anna
I have been following this story for a while now and I must show my gratitude for such quality work as the one you presented us with. It`s a rare occurrence that such intense and easily visualized writing is found and every time I do manage to come across something more than the usual I take the time to look into the author`s other posts. I must congratulate you again for your unbelievable talent and skill, and though I know nothing of you I can only imagine that you are a brilliant person and will continue to follow your work here on AFF. I wish you the most prolific career as a writer and hope you will continue to keep us entertained for we, your fans, are greatly appreciating your efforts.
Love and a huge thumbs up,
Anna
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April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While I cannot even begin to delve into the psyche of the characters you have created here in Renji and Byakuya because I am still a bit on edge regarding where you are taking this with the plot, I can comment on a few things....
As usual, you continue to have me in awe with your gift in bringing forth emotions so vividly, not through words, but with gestures and descriptions of movement. I say this referring to the interaction of the two characters in chapter 7. It was not with words that Byakuya's inner turmoil or struggles was related to me, nor was Renji's strong desire and need for "reality" and "gravity" to set in; rather the gestures of these men through narration was this communicated to me as a reader. The tightening of an arm, the caress of a cheek, a body facing forward, "a little exasperated puff of air", a thumb caressing a jaw, a joining of hands, etc., etc. These are but a few of many, but hopefully my point has gotten across.
Also, along the same lines, the intimacy you have created between these two characters who have yet to truly get to know one another on "any" level has left me quite speechless, and once again you have achieved this through gestures as opposed to dialogue and narration telling us so.
As this story continues, I truly hope to take the plunge and "get into" the minds of these men. (highlighter and tea in hand)
As with your other stories, your attention to detail, plot, and characterization is nothing short of breathtaking, and if that little "liason" in chapter 6 is but a taste into the sexual realm of this world that you have created with these two men...........
Once again, my lovely Darkprism I humbly bow at your feet!
As usual, you continue to have me in awe with your gift in bringing forth emotions so vividly, not through words, but with gestures and descriptions of movement. I say this referring to the interaction of the two characters in chapter 7. It was not with words that Byakuya's inner turmoil or struggles was related to me, nor was Renji's strong desire and need for "reality" and "gravity" to set in; rather the gestures of these men through narration was this communicated to me as a reader. The tightening of an arm, the caress of a cheek, a body facing forward, "a little exasperated puff of air", a thumb caressing a jaw, a joining of hands, etc., etc. These are but a few of many, but hopefully my point has gotten across.
Also, along the same lines, the intimacy you have created between these two characters who have yet to truly get to know one another on "any" level has left me quite speechless, and once again you have achieved this through gestures as opposed to dialogue and narration telling us so.
As this story continues, I truly hope to take the plunge and "get into" the minds of these men. (highlighter and tea in hand)
As with your other stories, your attention to detail, plot, and characterization is nothing short of breathtaking, and if that little "liason" in chapter 6 is but a taste into the sexual realm of this world that you have created with these two men...........
Once again, my lovely Darkprism I humbly bow at your feet!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don’t want anybody but Byaku. And everyone else pales in comparison. <---I loved that!
Oh another insanely wonderful chapter. Renji's dialogue, body language, perfection! That's my Renji! So sexy, I guess it's Byakuya's turn to invade his privacy..oh temperature is definitely getting too hot in there, omg..That's that one hot lemon. I love how Renji's the first one to experience being with Byakuya and his reactions are priceless. It made me lol a the little parts like how Renji was glad he cleaned up his desk. (I'm sure Byakuya looked sexy with the beads in his hair, though it made me lol a little when you mentioned how it made a little noise, it reminded me a hilarious episode of Friends where Monica gets cornrows, if your in the U.S you maybe familiar with it or not. I hope Renji get to top his Byaku next. Can't wait for more!
Oh another insanely wonderful chapter. Renji's dialogue, body language, perfection! That's my Renji! So sexy, I guess it's Byakuya's turn to invade his privacy..oh temperature is definitely getting too hot in there, omg..That's that one hot lemon. I love how Renji's the first one to experience being with Byakuya and his reactions are priceless. It made me lol a the little parts like how Renji was glad he cleaned up his desk. (I'm sure Byakuya looked sexy with the beads in his hair, though it made me lol a little when you mentioned how it made a little noise, it reminded me a hilarious episode of Friends where Monica gets cornrows, if your in the U.S you maybe familiar with it or not. I hope Renji get to top his Byaku next. Can't wait for more!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don’t want anybody but Byaku. And everyone else pales in comparison. <---I loved that!
Oh another insanely wonderful chapter. Renji's dialogue, body language, perfection! That's my Renji! So sexy, I guess it's Byakuya's turn to invade his privacy..oh temperature is definitely getting too hot in there, omg..That's that one hot lemon. I love how Renji's the first one to experience being with Byakuya and his reactions are priceless. It made me lol a the little parts like how Renji was glad he cleaned up his desk. I'm sure Byakuya looked hot with bead in his hair though it reminded me of a hilarious Friends episose when it was mentioned how it made a noise. I hope Renji get to top Bykauya next. Can't wait for more!
Oh another insanely wonderful chapter. Renji's dialogue, body language, perfection! That's my Renji! So sexy, I guess it's Byakuya's turn to invade his privacy..oh temperature is definitely getting too hot in there, omg..That's that one hot lemon. I love how Renji's the first one to experience being with Byakuya and his reactions are priceless. It made me lol a the little parts like how Renji was glad he cleaned up his desk. I'm sure Byakuya looked hot with bead in his hair though it reminded me of a hilarious Friends episose when it was mentioned how it made a noise. I hope Renji get to top Bykauya next. Can't wait for more!
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Shit. Wow.
Just when I think this story can't get any better - it leaves the previous chapter in the dust. I certainly hope there is more to be had?
Just when I think this story can't get any better - it leaves the previous chapter in the dust. I certainly hope there is more to be had?
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, that was a deliciously intense chapter! I'm loving this story so much. Please update again soon!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just when things were going so great, it all comes crashing down. Poor Renji and poor Byakuya for denying himself some fine Renji. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...
Nous attendrons et nous verrons....
Nous attendrons et nous verrons....
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol old man. I wasn't really thinking of the age difference before rofl. But that's really painful though. Renji is in love ^_^