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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not certain how you manage to keep surpassing your own excellence... but you do. Exquisite, agonizing, beautiful chapter. I'm looking forward to your next installment.
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Perfection as always. I bow down to you.
~ Sarah
~ Sarah
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good. I'm really enjoying reading your story. thanks so much^_^
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so hot! wow! i need to catch my breath! please i need more.....soon!
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH SWEET JESUS. That was hot as hell. please continue!
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Trust Byakuya to be the only one to be able to ruffle Renji's feathers. It's official Im addicted to this story.
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incredible! Intense, perfectly written, and hotter than hell.
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow...now I'm curious. I actually felt like I was there watching as I was reading the story. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! You write Renji with a near-unparalleled brilliance, and reading your work is a delight. I await the next installment with bated breath - and the shower on cold. Fantastic work!
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmhmmmm!
There is just something absolutely primal and delicious about that Abarai Renji. I am not quite sure if it is the tattoos or the wild child attitude, but seeing either that smirk or sneer just puts me in a mood of utter submission.... and in YOUR hands and in YOUR world of Monoshizukanohi where CARNAL and HEDONISTIC indulgence is the norm..... mmmmmm. I lick my lips, lower my eyes, and kneel at your feet in anticipation of up and coming chapters.
For you see, I detest the depection of the fiery and beautiful redhead in the anime and manga as he is brash, brutish, and ignorant. Even in fiction he is often portrayed as the poor street rat who lacks manners and must be subdued and whipped into shaped by one stoic and untouchable Kuchiki Byakuya - Boohoo!
In your first chapter, you have given me the primal and delicious redhead that I desire and believe Renji to be. He is the hunter, entreprenuer, intelligent, and deliciously sexual human being. And most importantly, when pit against one uptight Brunette, does not cower in a coner but goes after what he wants! I will admit there was some submission there, but was it not on equal ground! A bit of give and take if you will!
I have not been so excited for a story in a very long time! These two are absolutely heavenly, and I anticipate some sort of powerplay between them considering the world of Monoshizukanohi and Byakuha's words, "Most call me, 'Sir'." Which in your world can mean many things.
There is just something absolutely primal and delicious about that Abarai Renji. I am not quite sure if it is the tattoos or the wild child attitude, but seeing either that smirk or sneer just puts me in a mood of utter submission.... and in YOUR hands and in YOUR world of Monoshizukanohi where CARNAL and HEDONISTIC indulgence is the norm..... mmmmmm. I lick my lips, lower my eyes, and kneel at your feet in anticipation of up and coming chapters.
For you see, I detest the depection of the fiery and beautiful redhead in the anime and manga as he is brash, brutish, and ignorant. Even in fiction he is often portrayed as the poor street rat who lacks manners and must be subdued and whipped into shaped by one stoic and untouchable Kuchiki Byakuya - Boohoo!
In your first chapter, you have given me the primal and delicious redhead that I desire and believe Renji to be. He is the hunter, entreprenuer, intelligent, and deliciously sexual human being. And most importantly, when pit against one uptight Brunette, does not cower in a coner but goes after what he wants! I will admit there was some submission there, but was it not on equal ground! A bit of give and take if you will!
I have not been so excited for a story in a very long time! These two are absolutely heavenly, and I anticipate some sort of powerplay between them considering the world of Monoshizukanohi and Byakuha's words, "Most call me, 'Sir'." Which in your world can mean many things.