errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
schedule
April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You really need to work on your grammar. There's so many missing commas and other forms of punctuation that I simply couldn't enjoy the story. You have a nice, clean writing style that works well for this, but your grammar needs work. You can always look into getting a beta for that :) Nice read.
schedule
April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor mayuri..and awwww poor me..i can feel what mayuri felt..Byakuya is the dominant one....taking a nose dive now....
schedule
March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That... That was just wrong. Great and creepy,but wrong. Is there going to be another chapter? Please?
schedule
March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
om*! I love you - I seriously LOVE you! ;_; Finally somebody who writes that too! D: x3
And you did such a very good job at it too! The character portraits! Mayuri stalking them all. OH MY GAWD!
I hope you write more soon. x3
/goes back to read it again and again and again and...
And you did such a very good job at it too! The character portraits! Mayuri stalking them all. OH MY GAWD!
I hope you write more soon. x3
/goes back to read it again and again and again and...