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for Kiss and Control

by orionshadow

person makochan9
schedule April 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, while I love Different Circumstances, this could prove to be just as entertaining.
person cinnamongrrl
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this story, hope to see more soon.
person Kyradda
schedule March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor matsamoto! I think the poor dear is going to go grey with stress!! Great story like all your work is.
Can't wait for more,
your fan Kyradda.
person Anithene
schedule March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see you updated! I've enjoyed every chapter so far. You really have a grasp on the characters. I'm also relieved to finally see some Byakuya het. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
person Erosu787
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Honestly you have to update this fantastic story, I am dying to know what is next, your one of my favorite authors, you make crack pairings realistic enough so that they can be cannon. I strive to write like you, your prose is an inspiration. Please don't let this fic go.
person Anithene
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very glad to see this updated. I'm interested to see where this will end up going, can't wait to read more.
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! So happy to see a new chapter. Loved it. You're doing well to keep them in character, yet slowly work in how Byakuya would begin to change. Keep up the good work! Can't wait till the next chapter!
person P.Ours
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another beautifully written chapter, it amazes me how IC you keep Byakuya honestly you have a great talent. To read one of your fics is always a great literary pleasure since your prose is so well coordinated with the main character's situation. Cant wait when things start getting steamy. I really look forward of you updating this soon
person Jennyt82
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for more chapters!! I wasn't sure you'd continue with this story but i'm glad that you have. Good Byakuya fics are few and far between and you have to know that i hold your writing in the highest esteem. =) I think this one has great potential. I liked Byakuya's meeting excuse i doubt it'll work a second time but i'd love to know what Ran was thinking at the time. Give us another chapter soon!
person P.ours
schedule June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic surely surpassed my expectations by miles considering the odd pairing but your storyline is very believable. I praise your ability to keep everyone especially Byakuya in character to even his proper manner of speech, which very few authors can do. I look forward to following this story as I have greatly enjoyed your excellent grammer and unique plot. I want to remind you that this fic is worth continuing. You have made me a fan so please continue soon