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u must finish it O:

Where are the other two chapters?? *hopeful look* Really love this and where this is going *perverted grin*

Wow, really hot!!! Your story is really good, can't wait to read more. I wish I were stuck between them... @_@

apart from some grammatical errors, this is an awesome plotline, and i can't wait to read more

The first chapter was quite interesting so I'll be looking forward to reading more of this story. Also, I hope you won't take this as an offence, but maybe you should look for a beta to help you with editing the story. I have the feeling that it'll be very good and interesting, so you shouldn't take away from its quality with grammar mistakes or stuff like that. If you can't find anyone, send me an e-mail and I'll do my best to help you out, if you want. Well, I can't wait to read more, please update soon :)

i love your story ! it's change too see Ichigo be the dominant lol hope it will stay like this! lol and hope you understand what i say i'm french and i'm not very good for writhing english lol bye

More please!!