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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Here's another plea to continue with this story. It appears that you had every intention of doing so last summer but must have got bogged down in real life. I hope you still have a muse for it. I would love to see it completed. (check mark in the little box on the to do list is so satisfying) First person narrative, almost "Interview with an Arrancar", is usually a bit more than I can handle but I've really grown to enjoy it. I like how each couple slowly develops toward the consummation of their needs. I expect that the remaining unwritten chapters could well be mind blowing as you've teased the readers along toward this end. Don't leave us hanging and unsatisfied. Bring us our release!
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm only on chapter 2, but I'm really enjoying your story,so far. I am amazed, because I usually skip any story written in First Person Narrative...especially fanfiction, because I often find that my idea of what a character might be thinking or feeling in any given situation, and the writer's idea don't often sync-up. However, I think that you've definitely nailed Grimmjow's inner dialogue.
I haven't read all of the previous reviews for this story, so it may have been pointed out to you earlier, but the super-smart, super-powerful Hollows with the broken masks are called A-r-r-a-n-c-a-r, not a-r-r-a-c-n-a-r. I know, it seems like a nit-picky sort of thing to point out; however, the spelling is wrong in every iteration I've seen in your story so far, which leads me to believe that it's not just a typo that you're making, but a misconception.
It wouldn't be a big deal, except that every time I run across the misspelling, my brain automatically pauses to correct it, and it interrupts the flow of your story.
Your author's notes indicate that you have at least one beta, so it might be a good idea to make sure they know to double-check for that misspelling, when they give your new chapters the once-over.
Other than that one insignificant thing, your story is completely making me happy. Keep up the good work!
I haven't read all of the previous reviews for this story, so it may have been pointed out to you earlier, but the super-smart, super-powerful Hollows with the broken masks are called A-r-r-a-n-c-a-r, not a-r-r-a-c-n-a-r. I know, it seems like a nit-picky sort of thing to point out; however, the spelling is wrong in every iteration I've seen in your story so far, which leads me to believe that it's not just a typo that you're making, but a misconception.
It wouldn't be a big deal, except that every time I run across the misspelling, my brain automatically pauses to correct it, and it interrupts the flow of your story.
Your author's notes indicate that you have at least one beta, so it might be a good idea to make sure they know to double-check for that misspelling, when they give your new chapters the once-over.
Other than that one insignificant thing, your story is completely making me happy. Keep up the good work!
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September 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your work is greatly appreciated. I know how much RL can get in the way when you're too exhausted to think much less type. Thank you for continuing.
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September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I got so excited when I saw that this had been updated, but then I was bummed that it wasn't a chapter. Anyway I'm so happy you're continuing the story!! Can't wait for more. This is one of my favorite stories on AFF.net!!
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March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please tell me that you are still continuing this? I adore this story!
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February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really need to update this, I loved it :3
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totaly,Totaly love this fic...Keep
up the grate work....MORE CHAPPIES
PLEASE...X)
up the grate work....MORE CHAPPIES
PLEASE...X)
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Grimm-kitty, I hope your new job doesn't take too much time from your writing, because I can't wait long for more chapters. You are on my favorites list at fan fiction.net (if you're that Grimm-kitty)and I haven't figured out how to make you a favorite here. This story is amazing.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
I clicked on this thinking it was going to be some silly fan-girl induced smut fic but...It is so much better than that!
I have to say that I am actually very impressed with the fiction so far and I can not wait until you update it. I would though, like to see some more
focus on Stark and Kira. There isn't really much of them through the chapters.
KEEP GOING!
I clicked on this thinking it was going to be some silly fan-girl induced smut fic but...It is so much better than that!
I have to say that I am actually very impressed with the fiction so far and I can not wait until you update it. I would though, like to see some more
focus on Stark and Kira. There isn't really much of them through the chapters.
KEEP GOING!
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah for a new chapter. Very happy to see this one. Sorry it took so long for the review. Excellent work as usual. Very interested to see how everything plays out.