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by crunchysalad

person Deminos
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on another wonderful chapter. Onsen sex is such a wonderful cliche. Hahaha usually the sex is meant to be sickeningly sweet and gentle. I prefer your version. It had a nice rough touch to it.XD Good luck with your next chapter.
person Lethargy
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Byakuya is so cute in this story! You just wanna pinch his cheeks. XD I'm glad Ichigo was able to sign him! Something tells me Grimmjow isn't going to be happy about Ichigo's newest client, though...
person Person who thinks this fic is hot TTM
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
>.< I wrote a rather long review but AFF is screwy and when I submitted it, it just blanked on me >.<

GAHHHH.
Byakuya is so cute with his wanting to borrow Grimm and passion to snowboard but refuse to say so!
And this Chapter was hot like hothothothot! My nose bled :D teehee. Jealous Ichigo, Shy Ichigo, Prune Ichigo, Dirty-talking Ichigo and all kinds of other Ichigo you can find here is so hot, cute, adorable! Hahah good thing Grimm understands uke bahviour >.< He must be an expert! HAHAHHAHAH

Can't wait to see who Bya been practicing with, KenBya, SEXTAPESEXTAPE AND SUBSEQUENT BLACKMAILSEX (hopefully?) by Aizen, Gin's appearence andandand just about everything else. HAHA

I wonder who's the new client! Ulquiorra? Stark? Nnoitra? Kira? Lol, anyway, i'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter :D
And congrats on getting 100 reviews :D You deserve it! For providing awesome smut to us perverts :D
person Cricket
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I didn't mean to sound tooo demanding in my previous comment.xD I just got a little carried away.. I do that sometimes.. can't wait for the next chapter. Glad I inspired you.xD I loved this one. =D Daw, I think Grimmy is getting a little sweet on Ichi.x3 Takin' him into the bath by themselves, then wantin' to carry Ichi 'cause he thinks he'll look cute, but still screwin' him senseless whenever he can.xDD And HA! at Ichi smaking Byaku. Ichi pimpin' Grimmy out.. for some reason the phrase "slap a bitch" comes to my mind, don't know who it's referring to.xD
person mangofox
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its ulqui, isn't it? Yeah, its ulqui, trying to steal ichi away from grimm. >)

Anyway, phew! -fans self- this story it hot, definitely looking forward to more.
person Qiedia
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, it's updated again! This was such a yummy chapter and I am so glad that Ichigo finally got his wish fullfilled, it was really hot if I may say so. I read you author's note in the begininng and I just gotta say I am so glad that you decided to post this fic, despite that you were afraid of what people would say about it, beacuse this story rock my socks. And the dirty talk is amazing, not at all cringe but instead totally hot. :)

I just gotta say that I think it was so cute when Byakuya asked Ichigo (or rather demanded) to borrow Grimmy. I was sure that he had been scared for life after that session but I am glad to see that he wasn't. And it's really gonna be exciting to see who the knew client is. I have my suspicion that it might be Ulquiorra but since I am wrong most of the time I guess I'll just have to wait and see. ;P

Anyway, this was really a great chapter and I am looking forward to see what will happen in the next. Now when I think about it, that will be the tenth chapter. Way to go CrunchySalad! You've done an amazing work with this story. :)
person Jennifer
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my gawd that was hot!
keep up the awesome work , next chapter sounds promising...hehe
person Pickles
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is Aizen going to stalk Ichi again? I really do hope so :D
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Argh, YES fer onsen sex! Ah, I've been waiting fer an update on this. Tanks so much fer posting! This fic is just utter debauchery and I luv it~

Also, I really, REALLY hope his potential new client is not Ulquiorra. DX And if it is, he won't have a deal with him like he does Grimmjow and that he'll stay mostly with Grimm. Loyalties, man! Haha. :D
person nivell
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, Byakuya actually had the guts to ask Ichigo to pimp/loan out Grimm?? I'm sad that Ichigo didn't agree!! Lol, looks like Byakuya has a lil crush, or the sex may have just blew his mind away, hahha. I would love to see another Grimm/Byakuya scene since your Byakuya seems like he would be a freak in bed!